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Autistic 05-18-03 06:27 PM

Lyrical Lethal
 
hit’s n run’s, come get me but I’m 2 strong so ya need a few to chase-me/
Quit hating, don’t need-guns and there aint no refunds cuz you can’t replace-me/
I meant-it and indented my presence in my lyrics so ya’ll know what your facing/
Making curses in verses so far ahead of my time I change the slow pace to racing/
Hasty-exits got ya taking-credits made-you-afraid to spit so you trade-in the-shade/
Paid-as a-maid and raised-as a-slave, can’t get an A if ya payed-for the-grade/
Causin decades-of-headaches with tommy-guns on-the-run cuz I shred-fakes/
Blood on red-blades brains fake like plastic 2 drastic crack-it now your head-breaks/
Catch-a-snitch and stretch-ya-bitch like elastic her screams just so enthusiastic/
Flippin-positions like gymnastics trippin-visions so fantastic n’ none of it’s sarcastic/
Tragic with my magic casting-spells in an everlasting-hell consistent blasting-bells/
Attacking-cells when I’m cracking-shells ya backing-fell guess they was casting-well/
Shaking-now-breaking from decision-making precision-hating ya must be mistaking/
Mine-for the-taking some fine-whore’s that’s-aching raping with no sign of braking/
Aint no schedule-waiting cuz of the metal-plating most wanted is my federal-rating/
The pedals-flaking from deadly-dating 13 and already-mating left your friends-awaiting/
Fix-it don’t diss-this and witness-the-fitness of a man who’s ambitious-and-vicious/
Mischief-that’s-malicious superstitous-suspiscions against those judicious-decisions/
Aint’ excused from being-abused just now seeing-the-bruise from punches I’ve used/
Needing-to be-diffused short circuit and now It’s me-accused, U must be-confused/
Refused come back with sadistic-linguistic statistics in my quest to flow ballistic/
Get with-it stop bein simplistic-n-pessimistic spit futuristic and make shit artistic/
I gave you an opportunity to join my community and forever spit-with-immunity/
Attempt to begin a mutiny on our unity fluently tellin you to quit-wit-the-scrutiny/
Fatality’s-a-reality and lyrical abnormality’s-in-morality’s aint no more hospitality/
You got spiritual-originality I live with immortality and was born with lyrical lethality/

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Bash 05-18-03 06:32 PM

ooooooooooo damnnnnnnnnnnnnn , , This is tha Illest shit i have Read all day , , damn dawg , ,, Metaphorz were blazing , , wordplay was Tight, , u had everything in there dawg , , ,, Total Sickness dawg , , Vocab was Mutha fuckin Ill , , dawg Ill piece , ,Keep spittin , , 4 sho

Autistic 05-18-03 08:10 PM

thanx...uppin for more replies

Kosta 05-18-03 08:13 PM

pretty nice...battle type verse
flow was consistent. metas came
nicely...good shit. .. it flowed
good. a nice read before i
go to sleep...keep dropping
like this one here. and you
will be great.....peace

InFiNiTe_22 05-18-03 08:14 PM

.....da ILLEST shit getz slept on......nice drop...na, na, EXCELLENT drop.........

Autistic 05-20-03 12:00 AM

uppin

Autistic 05-21-03 04:07 PM

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