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Heroes
Yo Bash and tRilll thanks for keepin it critical with those replies.......I gotta a lot a work to do.........but I ain't goin no where!
Heroes to so many but they will forever be lost/ In life's labyrinth, but certainly not forgotten in thought/ So close to being on top that the skies opened up/ Snatched one after the other, leaving their families and stuff/ Hearts were bleedin, crying, grieving, definitely praying and such/ Had me misunderstanding to the fullest, no doubt believe I was touched/ Only the future makes you wonder what kind of cards you get dealt/ Fate fucking you over, or destiny royally flushing the wealth/ But these heroes remain in glory basically sacrificing them self/ Not questioning the heart of man in desperate need of some help/ ..............it's short, my shit isn't together today.....what you think? |
, ,, Make a longer drop ,, , , anywayz I think that this was actually a Tight piece , , ,Short but Tight , ,, you're improoving dawg ,,,, I liked tha whole concept of this drop ,, , , Simple but Tight , , ,, keep ur head up , ,and keep spittin dawg
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Bash, you right definitely need a longer drop but instead of draggin that shit out and disrupting the simplicity i cut it .......good looks though
Syke |
way too short but what was there was tight
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too short but it was tight
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.....all u have 2 do is keep workin cuzz.....shit u'll only get betta...it was a decent drop yo but make it longa....right when i started gettin in 2 it, it ended....jus keep practicin aight....peace bro.
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`more detail is all i ask or can think of that'll make it longer and iller
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