quick shit
 

this took me bout 10 minutes


tha only way you could derive your verse from mine is if you decipher the algorhythems/
you'v been placed in a prism, faced with a decision, both choices end with an incision/
its the principal your missin, ur gonna end up found by a fisherman/
im givin you advice homie cuz my words cause erosion why aint you listenin, this battles results will be blisterining/
fuck a battle prepare for a head on collision, then the battle will end with your submission/
only time you feelin ill kid is when you need to see a physician but how about a little fatal intervention/
aint no revealin the villian, when the villians are children in your buildin killin/
ill inject SARS into your genes and put you behind bars to preform tests/
my guess is that you'll be blessed to remain in possession of your arms and legs/
your infliction will turn a lumberjack into jesus while ya walkin on wooden pegs/

This piece was Tight dawg ,, , But u need some more metaphors......................Keep spittin

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written in 10 minutes?? you can tell shit was wack..lol..j/p nah but foreals it was tight..one of them words i dint know how to pronounce..the last wrd in tha first bar..lol..first time i saw that wrd so i was like 'huh'...naw well this was a nice piece...keep doin ya thang..pz

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this what tight i liked it hit up my peice featuring Bash Evil within

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