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wolf at the door vs teckneek
sorry kid i was biz for a sec.......i'll key this quick...drop if your done
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fuck lyrical domination i come with literal demonstration
leave you wet like condensation from verbal meditation cracked like pavement from attacks with each statement my thoughts adjacent ta kids who plot in basements seeking ta destroy words that come from this closed “DOOR” say no more I diminish “WOLF” in this siege of war hung from slipknots expose this phoney with 9 shots twin glocks spray hollows aimed at his wristwatch that’s spitting deeply how’s wolf scriptions gonna beat me i flow so sweetly its gonna take mad diction ta defeat me dudes like 24 he's still trying ta define one rhyme in one line i lay you on the floor like I did your dime your mike dreams get smoked like pipes from crack friends scrap schemes of you growing old in the rap scene unseen is your future like Christ in a room of blasphemy why contest ta attack me when i undress your shit so naturally |
wasnt this suppsosed ta be a quick battle???????????????????????????????????? fa real why the fuck do we need 100 characters ta post a fuckin 10 word reply
GAY i think |
sorry i didnt even see this kid....
you just tryed to roar but it came like a squeek, that shit was weak from this newbie teckneek// if you could sneek a peek past you "fat stomach" you would see this is your "da feet"// I come discreet and eat this battle like meat, couldnt make you rhymes flow even with a phat beat// I'm "straight forward" like the movement of my "rooks", my hooks get mad looks// I'm "fryin" you like "fast food cooks". cuz your weak attacks come from nursery rhyme books// Battling me is like "Shaq" on the "freethrow line", there is absolutely "no shot"// White boy thinks he's gangsta cause once he smoked pot, but sees a black person and runs scared cuz he's more rasist then Trent Lott// This muthafucka couldn't add "color" to this forum if he had a "paint can"// He's more "socially retarded" then "Dustin Hoffman" in the movie "Rain Man"// For your next battle try to savor some of my flavor it might make you come just a little bit braver// Inspectin teck, i broke his neck so quick i shoulda had him sign a waiver// I'm an assault maker, shook you quicker then a salt shaker// buried this bitch faker in a "casket" like the "undertaker"// |
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wolf's ryme;
if you could sneek a peek past you "fat stomach" you would see this is your "da feet"// it took me a min to fig. out the connection, but once i got it i was like ohh shit. I liked that line. Nice flow and punches TeckNeek's ryme; fuck lyrical domination i come with literal demonstration leave you wet like condensation from verbal meditation cracked like pavement from attacks with each statement these were sum nice lyrics, a nice lil intro. I liked that shit but the shit i didn't like was . . dudes like 24 he's still trying ta define one rhyme in one line i lay you on the floor like I did your dime that line...ppl have been usin those words to ryme wit for a long time, i just thought it was too repetitive but good flow n lyrics none the less The Break Down Lyrics: Both Flow: Teckneek Metas: Wolf Punches: Wolf Winner/Vote = Wolf at the door |
nice thanks kid. hit this up peoples. .................................................. ......................................
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niice battle but if i could vote i would have ta give it ta Wolf at the door, better wordplay and punches, these were da lines i thought won it for em...
Battling me is like "Shaq" on the "freethrow line", there is absolutely "no shot"// White boy thinks he's gangsta cause once he smoked pot, but sees a black person and runs scared cuz he's more rasist then Trent Lott// This muthafucka couldn't add "color" to this forum if he had a "paint can"// He's more "socially retarded" then "Dustin Hoffman" in the movie "Rain Man"// peace |
yeh i didnt like shit either thug ...after i posted it i was like that's WACK but whutevr its just a text battle im not gonna lose sleep over it ...haha
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uppin. lets gets some votes in here kids. ... . . . . . .. .
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Lyrics= tie
flow=Teckneek metas=Wolf punches=Teckneek vote- Teckneek vote on mine: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=46813 http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=46443 http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=46068 http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=46007 |
aight aight - we tied now - lets get some more votes up in this piece. me and teck will hit you back...................................
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come on yall lets get some votes going up in here. .. .................................................. ..................................
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come on yall dont sleep on this me and teck will hit you back on your battles. hit this up kids. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
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