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Rtikulate..vs..Born To Kill
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5 Votes Win 3-0 KO No Crew/DR Verses due in 1 Hour |
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'Kill' Bout To Get HURT, cuz i'll spit a PROMINENT VERSE, and Son Dont Even think of "dropping back" or U'll end up with yer "SPINE IN THE DIRT"..Am A TEXT EXPERT..but Tha' 9 Bout 2 BUST ACCURATE SHELLS with IMMACULATE STEALTH..the fire's never ABSENT ITS HELL..Kill's left with so many HOLES ...he'll have stiches OVERLAPPING THEMSELVES. (damn) Rtik's viscious PRESENCE, got diss kid CONVINCED my TEXT IS...worse punishment than GRIPPING WEAPONS squeezing till the CLIP DISPENSES..Kill dont WANT it cuz I"LL send HIM to HEAVEN.. throw him in the trunk of and "Acura" if you really wanna B IN "LEGENDS". (lolz) Kill pre-tends but dont MISTAKE it Son YOU'RE A CRUTCH, i'll disembowel ya, TAKING YOUR GUTS and BAKE EM FOR LUNCH...Rtik aint got no HESITATION TO BUST, so like caucasion barbers, Kill just aint MAKING THE CUT.. who Wuz thinking this DUDE CAN JUST HOLD ME? breaking-spine just a waist-of-time like Hoola HOOPING WITH ROLLIES.. theres no DISPUTING Kill UR PHONEY, u must be "trying to get ate (8)" like GROUPIES OF KOBE!... (damn) [[[FiniSHER]]] Kill just treat DISS LOSE like a 'PERIOD' cuz u'll be BITCHIN FOR DAYS.. its like Kill a HOMO-FLIRT the way HE be MIXIN' WIT GAYZ.. (lolz) |
Wow...
This shit has been floating out here for a while now... Never even saw it... I'll try and respond by 5pm C.S.T. |
For what it's worth...
When Ritikulate looks for curves, he actually looks for hourglasses...
He's always preferred men, even took dick-sucking classes! But those sands are running down, ya time's almost gone... I'm a kill this mis-spelled clown, with a song meant for a swan. Ritikulate thinks he's the Midnight Cowboy, "I'm walkin here! I'm walkin here!" But he's really just a gay boytoy, A FUCKIN QUEER! A FUCKIN QUEER! I could sing about this fag, all the live long day... But I'll stop this shit, get back to rappin, and put this bitch away! I'm the Taliban up in here, blast your side, open up a lryical hole... Having you screaming in terror, more fucked up than ever, Ritikulate: the human U.S.S. Cole. Your time has been fleeting, I'm a set ya up for a beating, like a golf ball on a tee... Please take a seating, and start rhyme eating, as I lyrically "club" thee! You're a drunk alcoholic, pencil neck geek, and your liver's startin to quiver... While I'm metabolic, bustin physique, I flex and you cry me a river... Dumb ass addict, ya accidentally shot chlorophyll... Now ya green like a plant, I'm a put ya on my windowsill. Keep you around, and laugh at your rhymes and lines... Have your neighbors be ferns, and ivys with vines. You're dumb, no brain in ya head, the cat scan couldn't trace... Just a tiny little sign, in place of ya mind, FOR RENT: STORAGE SPACE. |
this battle was just two different styles ..it was ok.....
Born to kill..word play pretty good could have been phrased to hit better.......... Rtikulate ...very good flow many fillers.. so to this i choose a winner.. vote=Born to kill |
This battle was aight..
ticulate...you had a wierd style,..and your rhyme scheme was horrible..not too many punches..and lil bit of wordplay... Overall..5/10 BTK..Hmm..it had a few punches in it that in my mind won this match..ya flow was errr.. Overall 6/10.. V-BTK.. Hit my battle up with Chrit..and Fgee.. Peace -1- |
First Uppin...
Old battle... Can I get this put away? One way or another... Anxious to know the winner. Thanks Peace |
Born2Flow got this.Better punches.I liked the walking,fuckin queer part.It made me laugh.I didnt like how rit set up his verse.St8 battle
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=59666 |
My bad I meant to put born to kill not born 2 flow.lmao.Born to kill gets my vote.........
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Rtikulate came madd weak, paragraph style ruined his flow from the start, and the capitalising the wordplay and punches just makes you look like a complete herb, none of your lines were hard hitting or creative, at least Born To Kill came about average. .
Vote: Born To Kill |
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word up....good explaining Cam.. http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=60623 |
^^No Need To Be Said A Third Time...B2K Had Bettep Punches And Flow...R-Tik You Need More Creativity In Your Verse...Pretty Much Basic...B2K Had Some Thought Put In His Verse...
Vote - Born To Kill |
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