confusd open mic
 

yo a dont kno wat was goin thru ma head here but a wrote it so a might as well put it up

haent got a title though




things get worse evry day but better over tha years
hours of happiness make up for minutes of tears
memories can bring back many unwanted thoughts
but the thing people dont ko is that memories can be forgot
people can be forgot, and people can be neglected
people can be made to fall or hurt and be subjected
to violence of an unseen nature
killin on themselves and bein theyre only real hater
the worst critism yall recive is the stuff from yoself
then you sittin and wonder why it is you hurtin everyone else
sittin prayin that the blood on your hand should wash away
knowin that tomorro is the last of all yo days
theyre comin for you in tha truck ta take you to death row
but how you got there youre the only one who knows
a life of thuggin and dealin and domestic violence on yo wife
is gonna cuase you sleepin in a cement room wit bars yo whole life
yo only frined be yo memories of past moments you hold dear
the ones that you have acumulatied over the eyars
but all they be filled with is anger hait and pain
you sit theyre cryin as all you feel is ashamed
ashamed of who and wat you are
and what will become of you....man you wanted togo far
wanted to get out the hood and make a life for your family
but now youve blown it all away like it yout thought it would never be
dreams re the foundation of everyones life
if you fall flat on your face get up and give it another try
when you low on money work, dont break into another store
you never listened though and aint got no chances anymo
stuck in a dead end now with no life ahead of you
your futures look bleak so what the hell you gonna do
no shit jail break i thought your dumb ass new betta
appeal for a trail and then try to just forget it
but no you got a police man by the throat against the wall
youre gonna fuck up what you have left and have nothing at all
suits me fine though cause i aint in your position
although i fell for ou man it aint a nice situation ta be in
i kno cause i was there once..just like you
but i didnt decide to do that same things as ou do
i kept ma nose clean got out and startd a whole new life
but while you stand ther bustin on a gy you aint thinkin bout yo wife
she cares for you man andyou just lettin her down
she ain ever gonna see you again because your not gonna be around
sentance to the chair for double murder aint what she needs
aint got no money now but she got your babys to feed
so there she goes on the streets to make her money for her cause
while you stand up in heaven crying and all the things you have lost

....excellent drop gurl........i kno how u feel......shorty i felt da whole thing.....very, very nice drop....i def. wanna hear mo frum u......

thanks man im alot better at open mics than battles..as ou can ll lol

dont sleep on me people i need opinions

This was really tight , ,, u are better at Open mics than battle

thanks man ... i think lol uppin fo mo opinions

I was feelin' the emotion in this.. mad ismplistic vocab conveyed your thoughts real clear.. "but the thing people dont ko is that memories can be forgot
people can be forgot, and people can be neglected
people can be made to fall or hurt and be subjected"...
you got straight to the point and that's straight.. you may have been confused but it wasn't confusing and in a way it was up-lifting.. nice drop gurl.. 1

thanks man..uppin fo mo opinions

This was ill mami...

feelin ya style..

stay up fam..

I'm wit BlUnT-MC on this one. Great drop, really felt what you were expressin there

plese hit ths shit up casue a want some opinions aight, its an oldie but i dont think alot of people replied so am puttin it up

yo tis was deep i see wat u meant bout tis and tis was honestly ya best drop tat ive read so far keep it up and ima be waitin for ya next piece

Emotional Piece deffinitly didnt see you do alot of Open Mics but damn shawty Nice drop Contend wus nice and .........Emotions appeared on this piece perfectly


Nice one FAM