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Accelerate 05-20-03 10:38 PM

B.R.E prezentz:One Love
 
Deepness uncovers Weakness/
Represent Holy figures like I was Jesus/
And every rhyme I write,my brain loses it all/
Spirituality like the last stand and first fall/
And then you hear old rhymes mechanically/
Newbies gettin conceited,fall back,from battlin me/
I'm here to make a name for myself,want something/
but all i do is get slept on like nothing/
And to be the best you must climb to the top/
like Darwin's theory,is you don't evolve,you will rot/
Your rhymes are all the same, recycled like earth day/
And then losing to battles, whose to blame?/
So whackness written on you like a road sign/
All drivers see it, and take it out in no time/
So to be the best you beat the best,thats rule 1/
Rule 2, is fuck wit me to meet a Gun/


(verse 2)
Fighting to the top like the way to go/
15 minutes, what matters is what you did, yo/
The achievements go as far as being put in books/
But in musi, a hot rhyme,is stored in a beats hook/
You all have to elevate at one time/
From being a played newbie to creating hot lines/
And you have to keep growin as you move/
And while growing, keeping all ways to stay smooth/
So stay elevatin and never try to stop/
Cuz you'll get stepped on, and no longer are you hot/
The greatest thing/
A gift from God to rap or sing/
like you perspire the more you move and drink/
So to rid you of the wastes that you bring in/
So to be the best you beat the best,thats rule 1/
Rule 2, is fuck wit me to meet a Gun/

R-Sinic Jaws 05-20-03 10:43 PM

One word describes this flow..................HOT

Accelerate 05-20-03 10:43 PM

uppin!

Accelerate 05-20-03 10:55 PM

whyy musst yaa sleep

Bash 05-20-03 10:56 PM

This piece was tight man , ,content was Riding,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, keep spittin out fire bout tha truth........

Accelerate 05-20-03 11:03 PM

uppin....

Accelerate 05-20-03 11:19 PM

don't sleep

Bash 05-21-03 12:00 AM

uppin for fam

MiNdLeSs 05-21-03 12:07 AM

decent drop, flow was on point

... it was good so i only got one tip of advice... try changin up your rhyme pattern, instead of just rhyming at the end, nah mean?...

Bash 05-21-03 06:45 PM

uppin

InFiNiTe_22 05-21-03 07:57 PM

......damn homie.....u holdin this shit down dawg....fo sho.....this shit is fuckin ILL.........

Passivist 05-21-03 08:06 PM

Tight dawg tight

InFiNiTe_22 05-21-03 09:13 PM

.....uppin 4 my boy.........

metaphysical one 05-22-03 02:25 PM

i liked it, shit was pretty tight. good spit fam. 1


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