*fucked up morals and democracy* going into audio..ill shit
 

ai'yo
the whole world collapses and relaxes
people faced with moral dissatisfaction
interactions, aint civil no more in our communities
our young race dont have ne good opportunities
homes start to break up n no longer make up
it seems to be money n hate that makes us
others put in behind all them money makers
instead of helpin the people, n helpin all races
we all have to struggle here to survive
mentally, i get messed up in these emotional tides
love, gets raplaced by crime and unforgiving
made me think again bout this place im living
sit n watch as the world turns with its drug traffic
and the poor struggle while the rich sit laughin



verse 2:
im just tryna live, im testing my will power
lookin around the world devours it by the hour
our headlines hit with, corrupts MP's, missin person
gang shootings, drugs, another person murdered
i cant even bare to think bout the shit that ive heard of
cant make sense, and the shit just gets worse
everyday, theres a war, in everyplace of the world
government fucks u over, wever u man, woman, boy or girl
justice aint shit, when u judged for dressin like a stereotype
officials with white stripes r the ones to put ya life right
its like you cant trust anybody no more
gotta think b4 openin ur own front door
streets have changed, goin from raps to gats
now its all bout busting n ratta-tat-tat

verse 3:
kids breakin into flats taking watever they can
wrecking peoples lives for the sake of a grand
u cant deny, that days dont pass by
when the news aint open your eye
children scared to school, the shits shocking
not stoppin- thats why we got truancy as a problem
its hard to put it down to one simple reason
for all the civil, when all our public are dis-beleiving
that shit happened since the dawn of time
back when man allowed greed into his mind
the dispicable kind, who live better off
aslong as they live good, ne1 else, cant give a toss
so who can change this life that i got?
take there best shot, but ima still get my points across

interactions, aint civil no more in our communities
our young race dont have ne good opportunities.......good shit that whole song would be good.......u need ta put in a hook......lked the vocab in the first verse but then it seemed to get more simple and simpler...........but still dope piece

like trill said...sound slike it could do with a chorus in there.but yar,it was aiight,it did get simpler toweard the end but it was still a good pecie,the begining was nice,but dropped toward the end...sall good make a nice song,if you doin the shit an postin on hte net let me know eh....

bismillah