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Battle: HellRaizor vs. Thatakeova
aight here the rules
10 lines no crew votes d/r you know the drill drops must be posted by 5:00 est. time cause im in school making this up you spit first champ. |
yo i said you drop first champ 11111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111 11111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111 111111111111
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look nigga, comin elite thinkin u got a chance, bitch please
bitch u couldnt raise hell if ya head was full of needles and pins// even if u took two hellbound UUncles on a elavata u still couldnt up ya wins// my rymes will bust ya ass like slip and slide productions// u fag, stop sayin "i'll show u a trick daddy if u let me squeeze dem muffins// i'll *wack da shit out ya verse wit a stick dat jus gave a horse anal// now they reek of da *wack shitt they are,so i'll know if u try to bite some o.k type shit u cant handle// dis is immortal kombat cause i got no soul so i'll rip ya heart out like kano// Micheal Eubanks said u can host da newly wed show but dont get too happy// the only thing u can hook up is a Bullshit ass verse about how ya shit stay assy// u took dis loss lovely, now its terror in ya heart when its dis name u see,and wit all said ya punk ass still counldnt B ME// micheal eubanks is da host of dat old show da newlyweds double Uncle =w=wins might get edited for spellin cause i cant see dat much shit in dis quick reply box |
upppppppppppppppppppp yppppppppp in for ya verse big dog i wanna see wat tu got so hurry up and spit caus ei got otha battles
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that was a good post champ
what the fuck was you thinkin when you accepted my challenge 'B',cause after this you goin follow my rhymes like they was religiously// makin me defeat you, which isnt a hard task,cause ill be quick to let you see whats up when i lay you on ya back// i dont even think you were ready for this attack, like suicide bombers on the creep i got somethin in my bag-that'll make you go high and i aint talkin bout a dime bag// and its just the facts that ill treat you like a dog in the pund and get the muzzle, cause all the kids on this site been hypin ya head so much ya got big nostrils like that kid mario// and im sorry yo that i have to do this to you but its a must, and after my next few lines you'll be considered crushed// and i aint even have to rush with this to get in ya face,cause i dont use wordplay i use knifeplay that'll turn you from straight to gay in less than a day// i dont consider this an honor i make it my duty,cause you could have a sniper rifle and you still wouldnt be able to shoot me// like jay-z said "the waits ova", cause after the way this is hurtin you ya new name should be "gettin a new makeova"// i gotta admit this was a good battle for my first time, but to beat me your gonna need a country singer to make ya shit rhyme// -1- good luck on this one |
uppin for votes be honest if you do vote -1- ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~```
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yo stop sleepin on this battle and vote sleepy head ass niggas this joint was hot and yall niggas is fakin yo 1111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111
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are yal registered voters
go check out my battle with vendetta and vote and I'll be sure to come back and return tha favor>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> ************************************************** ** |
^^^^hes a shady BITCH ASS NIGGA sorry gotta speak my mind..
on to tha battle............. takeova got my vote why? jus comparin both verse structures u can tell hellraisor lacks flow ova's verse was much nicer in that catogry and im sorry yo that i have to do this to you but its a must, and after my next few lines you'll be considered crushed// and i aint even have to rush with this to get in ya face,cause i dont use wordplay i use knifeplay that'll turn you from straight to gay in less than a day// ^^^ keep praticin hellraisor tha last bar doenst flo together and tha one above it is weak like u were dillutin milk wit water kid bitch u couldnt raise hell if ya head was full of needles and pins// even if u took two hellbound UUncles on a elavata u still couldnt up ya wins// ^^^hellraisor try startin off wit a nice 'bang' like this (not that exact bar somethin of ur own creative and powerfull) instead of that .................ya u read it B and religiously is not a good combination lacks any thoughtfullness and cuz well.....B is a letter not a word or a word phrase ya know? nice battle 'gone' |
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see this is why i dont battle on here niggas always want you to vote on theirs but cant vote on yours thats cool though i aint trippin -1-
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c'mon uppin uppin uppin uppin uppin uppin uppin uppin uppin uppin uppin uppin uppin uppin uppin uppin uppin uppin uppin uppin uppin uppin dis shit
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