My Life.. (don't sleep.. soon 2b audio.. need feedback)
 

<< HOOK >>
fuck thug-life, I ain't gangsta.. just livin' out my life.//
If I commit crimes or hit with nines it's my life.//
my stryfe isn't blamed on the area I reside, it's my life.//
I try to fair right but sometimes it just takes a wrong turn.. it's my life.//

my life has been lived thru drama and bad karma.//
good times come but it's enevitable tha next'll be harda.//
my flex'll be bar'd up, nothin' goes exact like mathmatical equasions.//
practicallity's lost in thoughts of exasperation.//
doubt and denial ceize my mind like a manic without medication.//
however my dedication to this game keep me real thru rain or shine.//
pain or elevation to new heights, contemplation on news hype.//
revelations of sound booths with loose lines.//
I choose life....(X2)

<< HOOK >>

five times the level you'll ever achieve.//
I realized at an early age I had to straighten up to sucseed.//
tighten my belt and focus on my goals and dreams.//
as my life un-folds it seems, I can do whatever I want.//
whenever I want, aslong as I set my mind right, I'm-a never fall off.//
I'm contendin' with legends and circumstantial gods.//
so in this instance to advance I'll have to give it my all.//
if I'm livin' at all, I hear my call.//
weather or not I answer is my choice, it's my life dawg.//
.. it my life ..

<< HOOK >>

howcome people try'n-ta run my life.//
like I'm not free to do whatever I like.//
I need to do whatever feels right.//
that's the real light, to not conceal emotions and shine bright.//
set my wheels in motion and find my niche.//
in line for food stamps, or lying in a ditch.//
if that's the path I choose, then that's it.//
but if I choose to be rich that's what I'll be.//
drop a bomb on this industry and be idolized like D-R-E.//
see are we really meant to be; slaves to government standards.//
or social values, economic's and corrupted leaders spreadin' illness like cancer.//
be robots and follow the commander, not stand for what we believe in and end in stillness right after.//
that ain't life....(X2)
..this my life...

<< HOOK >>

uppin.. sleepers can suck my ass

why you all hating

fuck sleepers.. I need criticism.. holla

Maybe if you were patient and let people read them, They wouldnt hate, instead of uppin yourself

I need to do whatever feels right.//
that's the real light, to not conceal emotions and shine bright.//
set my wheels in motion and find my niche.//
in line for food stamps, or lying in a ditch.//
if that's the path I choose, then that's it.//
but if I choose to be rich that's what I'll be.//
drop a bomb on this industry and be idolized like D-R-E.//

I liked it. Probably sound better on audio cause I've heard your stuff and you flow good on audio. Good flow..dont cry anymore

don't cry anymore.. lol.. whatever, people always sleep on me.. but htanks for the comment anyway