Battle Piece
 

re newing first post piece..

you got flow and multie's but its real simple you gotta make it more complex and develop ure punch's cos there a bit played
Read around the site an' have a look at people's work wot they do to complex it and make it hit.

Try puches mo' like dis

"I'll have you talkin' at a slower pace after I put 'Shells' in ya 'Turtleneck'"/

"essence tryed to 'ride' but could'nt because he gets "CAR SICK"/

Shit like that

this thread should go in the wackness centre ai dawg
Keep ya head up an' you'll be ai

-one love-

wat da fuck

theres no verse to comment on...post it back up?