dw vs trench p
 

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no crew votes

u spit first!

NH you dogg you set it up go!
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Aha this shall be FUN,
I dont no what the fucks worse bein DW or havin a record11-3/
Has the thought of elivation or self improvisation ever crossed your "mind"?/
Take a hint, mabe you lossed so many battles because cats get turned of homeys talkin bout dicks in there "behinds"/
i mean come on you went down in rb legend for having the most defeats/
Mothefucker jeez you must have a small dick,(i mean you would have to to fuck mothes)I dont have to post for this battle to "complete" itself/
I dont noo how you clamied any "victims" jeez they musta pulled a no show either that or they realised that the only time there wack is when they post next to you/
In your battle with apu you were talkin about cats who had there dicks "floppy",
I guess yo uno from experience that youre rymes will never be fresh always "soggy"/
dw what the fuck am i trippin or does that stand for dick "wanker"/
This will be the 11th time he would of have to me his "maker"
AND YOU HAD THE NERVE to post up a "challenge"/
You rappin bout other cats mums jeez i dont no how you "Manage"/
You give wack about a whole dictionary full of "meanin"/
"I used to think dope and wack had a balance but youre ruinni the leanin"/
I dont need no Finishin move to end your life i did it in the first "line"
You can let your daddy do that to you but you can stay away from "mine"
BEHEST, MOTHEFUCKER!
this is his crew noticed how he spelt motherfuucker lolTHIS IS WHY I HAD THE MOTHFUCKING SHIT IN IT
Now you spit

Treach p you’re a disgrace! N whos 2 blame? Your 2 blame 4 goin straight 4 the fame before u’ve even gathered the respect in the game/
If u ever audio battle let me no, so I can put ear plugs in n make a personal no-show/
You’re a homie whos tryer elevate, but I’ve seen more elevation from a hot air balloon which hunters been usin as bate/
I only lost so many battles cos im battling the best straight away, I got as many wins as u n u battling newbies who letting u win cos u pay/
U just a shit dick whos bumming niggaz everyday, u must av inherited that shit from ya dad cos hes gay/
Did u no hes in prison 4 robbin a liquer store, he did that on purpose cos he likes pickin up the soap off the shower floor/
Your like a fuckin bacteria, but im the bleach, you’re a wack mother fucker who got a problem wiv speech/
Your dislecsic dawg cos that shit can’t be wot u meant 2 write, boy this ain’t a circus this a lyrical fight/
These rhymes getting under ya skin like a scarab beetle/
I’l slice ya arm wiv a knife then inject in heroin wiv a rusty needle/
Laughin, as Watch the sweat drippin from ya pours while inflictin u wiv pain/
This heres burnin through your skin like a heavy dose of acid rain/
This shit as tight as a knot on a parachute harness/
U about as tight as lace that can’t be tied cos its been polished off wiv varnish/
Im gonna stop now cos ya grittin ya teeth so much Im startin 2 c cracks, now giv up rappin nigga n get a job servin up big macs!

That’s it y’all, uppin!!!!!!!!!

uppin some votes y'all!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Vote Treach P




Interesting style...Return the favor and vote on Lillem vs TriX


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uppin y'all!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

vote treach p - all around a better battle - he had better punches. dw not bad though. hit up my battle with born to kill.

uppin thanx for that willr eturn favour............................................ .................................................. ...............................

I reckon treach took this, just, came more consistent than dw...
dw only really had one nice line..

You’re a homie whos tryer elevate, but I’ve seen more elevation from a hot air balloon which hunters been usin as bate/

That was alright but nothing else really hit hard...Treach was consistent had more hard hitting lines.....Pz.....

uppin 3 thats a k.o but need more ot go for 5 pace upppin............................................ .................................................. ............................

my vote goes to Treach p for better flow and
better punchlines..................... ........... -one

noticed you did a bit off job editing there mate lol............................................... .............you should off left ya verse how it was

ya treach p had some nice shit, otha 1 wasn't all that bad but treach just had betta punches n all, hit up my battle against xplicit, hott shit man
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