no apologies accepted your psychology is misdirected
 

no apologies accepted
your psychology is misdirected
capable of the unexpected
especially when situations is hected
this shit im going to perfect it
This is it im going dislectic
the microphone i done wrecked it
change your tone or get dissected
bullets in the guns get ejected
with no exaggeration
same old story use imagination
this is for street glory and infatuation
not for your amusement or fascination
not for your abusement or congradulations
im doing it for my history
pursuing life like a mystery
fuc with me i give you misery
i was taught to be a hood disciple
i fought with hands and if i lost i get the rifle
never get caught cause thats what life is a cycle
always prepared and ready to die
never scared im ready to fly
no one cared and im going to show you why cause
all the wrong i did in my life time
im gone die fast wont be long not in my right mind
so i guess this is my documentary
ill keep my stress until the cemetary
this is just less to put in my obituary
tell God i wasnt bless and maybe hell carry
me to the golden mansion when i get buried.

see i liked it all the way up to the guns an dbullets and fuck part,that was ill up to there,but apart from that,the rest i liked,hada kinda slow stop start sound to it,almost like ermmm,who is it,,,,shit...rayz walz...kinda thts nott the mc but someone similar nahmeannice vocab throughout it,had a kind of long bar small bar thign going,wich made it sounds rather choppy,bu it was still aiight...what do you mean by you goign dislecsic?i didnt understadn that...was bit funny....

i was taught to be a hood disciple

after thi sline th evocab seemed to drop,and th elfow fell off lightly,it still carried bu tit was a bit messy nahmean,all in a ll good verse,but just watch the choppyiness...

return th efavou rdun...



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I personally liked it.. smaller lines gave it a nice flow.. it was a pretty basic rap, but as far as skill level goes you're up there, just a different style..

"bullets in the guns get ejected
with no exaggeration
same old story use imagination
this is for street glory and infatuation
not for your amusement or fascination
not for your abusement or congradulations....."

^ I liked those lines.. they went together well, .. ne-way.. holla