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R-Sinic Jaws 05-22-03 03:25 PM

Straight raw.
 
Yo...I'm a black kid from Morehead and aint ashamed of that/
you see this mack it's gone go where ya brains live at/
Don't play me black..Cause once you un this game you can't turn back/
Until you fall off of tha charts you forever trapped/
And we'll stomp anyone you wack groups that rap in a battle rap/
So if mc's wonna beef wit us u better squash that/
Cause our ryhmes are ready to spit like a cocked glock holding a full clip/
Ready to rip any wonna be mc's to shreds like a shark with his razor sharp teeth sunk deep in ya flesh/Therefore when I spit you better hold ya breath and grip ya chest/
Cause after I finish spitten you gone end up astounded & speechless/
Thinkin i never heard a person wit type of asortment of lyrics/
Plus I got so much anger pent up inside of me/
If i released it all i coulp probly kick a tripple cd/
And viciously vent on everybody that picked on me/
And you better kill me and ask questions later/
Before I grab artillery and and start pumping like Arnold Sczaranager/
Cause these bullets will rip throug ya bones like they were paper/
That's why you wish you could spit this good/
But if you could spit this good would you do it/
Cause my rhymes are like needles filled wit imbombing fluid/
Plus my raw metaphores will rip through ya vocal cords so you can't spit no more/
And on this mic i'm tha only mc from M-City that's trully hardcore/
So who wanna go to war wit words/
Cause my main purpose is to get on youre nerve's/
With mad nouns,adverbs and no curse words/
That why I say i'm tha illest rapper on earth/
Plus when I came I chaged tha rap game from sane to insane with these 1 million degree flames/
That badly singed every mc around me/
And that's why they really dispise me/
And want to literally kill me/
That's why I want let them get their filthy hands on me/
But there's so many ways to turn and go/
I really don't know which way I want to go/
But if I bottled all my anger up/
And threw it tha whole world would blow up/

R-Sinic Jaws 05-22-03 04:17 PM

Uppin feed back.

BlUnT-MC 05-22-03 04:21 PM

not the best.. kinda weak actually.. you need to up the vocab a little, 'cause the flow was there but the lack of vocab and structure were a little off

Bash 05-22-03 06:38 PM

THIS DROP WAS AIGHT


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