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§olja*Lyricist 05-22-03 04:39 PM

"Man On Death Row"
 
Man On Death Row
1st verse- Solja Lyricist 10 min key
Trapped and thoughts running through his head faster than the speed of light/
He now shamefully regrets all the fifteen victims he murdered with his knife/
When numbers are spoken he begins to become nervous and his hands tremors/
At night he hears a ghostly voice in his head asking a question
"Do you remember"/
Voices haunt him every single night and he cant seem to let go of his past/
He wishes he had a gun so he could just blast himself ending life in a flash/
The families that have suffered tragedy wants death to be by the electrical chair/
He wants lethal injection so that knowone could hear him scream like a queer/
Thoughts surface in his head, but his expression shows no remorse/
Should repent before he ends up dead, but he's occupied with the voice/

2nd verse- Mentally Disturbed-5min key
Most men on death row have prolly done something wrong/
So let me bring you into the mind of a man about to die strong/

First it begins, you've broken the law, then the cops come to arrest and stick you behind bars/
Every night you look and pray to stars for another chance, but it's to late cuz ya left a family with scars/
Your called a sick phsyco sadistic freak, but ya really not ya just wanted to kill the weak/
R.est I.n P.eace, It's to late to change the facts that ya put a bullet thru someone's cheek/

Ya finally get sentenced, you come back a year later to hear what ya get/
Ya hear "DEATH SENTENCE" and tear drops into your mouth and you spit/
The judges body guards grab you before you hurt someone
but you really dont care cuz your on "Death Row" and you've already killed one/

Ya beg and pleed not to be killed, but people could care less now cuz brains you've already spilled/
Guard asks ya what ya want for your last meal/
but you make another threat cuz your made, "DO YOU WANNA BE KILLED"/
So you get grabed up, People sayin "WTF was you thinking"/
You say I "I still dont know", "Was I Drinking"?/
Your thrown in the chair, every-body wants to smell your body stinking/
But you can't think of shit cuz your already done thinking/
Cuz theirs nothing you can do know, the switch is pulled/
And all people see is blood pour outta ya eye's like mouth over-flowed with drool/

RythmicTendicies 05-22-03 04:46 PM

thought that was deep tight shit, kinda rmeined me of me and withersman collab though ;)

you vocab and flow were dope, i wuz feelin this:"Thoughts surface in his head, but his expression shows no remorse/
Should repent before he ends up dead, but he's occupied with the voice/"

§olja*Lyricist 05-22-03 04:48 PM

Thnx for the response could you drop a link to your collab?

BlUnT-MC 05-22-03 04:51 PM

deep, vocab was a little lacking in my opinion.. flow was off, you got mad potential, but need to work on style and delivery.. nice drop tho dawg.. uppin'

§olja*Lyricist 05-22-03 04:56 PM

aighgt thnx for the response playa

§olja*Lyricist 05-22-03 05:17 PM

uppin

§olja*Lyricist 05-22-03 06:28 PM

uppin

Bash 05-22-03 06:33 PM

This was Ill as Hell................I liked tha Topic..........Deep drop..........this drop didnt need vocabulary............Ill piece Family

§olja*Lyricist 05-22-03 06:35 PM

thnx for the response playa

Passivist 05-22-03 06:43 PM

tight

§olja*Lyricist 05-22-03 06:51 PM

thnx man

§olja*Lyricist 05-22-03 08:27 PM

uppin

§olja*Lyricist 05-22-03 11:56 PM

uppin

InFiNiTe_22 05-23-03 12:06 AM

........excellent drop fam.......fo sho........uppin 4 my boy.....mad propz dawg.........peace

§olja*Lyricist 05-23-03 12:11 AM

^Thnx for the response fam


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