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Get Off My Chest
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Livin this life after commencement, no sense of direction/ Got huge loans to repay, health insurance, learnin the lessons/ Looking for sources of income, this mental congestion/ Has got me confessin that I'm in a position to start stressin/ Waiting for life to curve and throw me a break or two/ Frustration, cloud separation, wishin the sun would shine through/ But unfortunately, when it rains, it always decides to pour/ Conversation with God askin him what exactly this life's for/ When 90 percent of the time you're strugglin to get on your feet/ Expects you to have faith in things when you're constantly facing defeat/ Desperately reaching out for dreams that you always awake from/ Hoping somewhere there's someone willin to show love/ Yet in reality you're on your own, you gotta earn it the hard way/ Not gonna stack chips by loungin couch-style with Frito Lay/ But stayin positive's a bitch when the news just portrays the worst/ Murders, Kidnappings, Domestic disputes, "You hear it first!"/ Got these teenagers rapping, crying for help, in every verse/ But these officals just watch, instead of the bus they ride the hearse/ And at the same time we're supposed to try and live the American dream/ While government robs us blind and destroys people's self-esteem/ Fuck that, I'm 21 and I'm already in a ton of debt/ Because of a lousy college degree, these bastards suggest I get/ I'm undeniable proof that the piece of paper don't really mean dick/ It just means I wasted money when I could've been writing this shit! Syke |
just gotta say....its hott....
eyo, i'm lookin fo someone to do a collab wit...Hit me back if ya wanna.... |
This was hot man......Nice content
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Yo Bash, thanks man I'm just trying to raise the level.....know what I mean and Slik.......much love kid but I ain't ready to collab yet I want to sharpen up my shit first.........no disrespect but I'll hit you back let me check out your style haven't really got a chance to read much in here........but i'll holla..........peace
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good work man, this was a really real piece. It's cool when shit is real, because al ot of the time its abstract and hard to understand...lol I just wrote a piece that like that. Your flow fell off a few times, but it was generally pretty good
Check out my new one "the straw that broke the camel's back" Peace |
ight syke...i got some shit posted up in here...."make them listen" check that....hit me back....i know ur new and shit...so take all the time ya need....payce
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Yo just wonderin if anyone was interested in some competition.......since I'm new at this shit you'd have to set it up but I just wanna get some battles up under my belt.......Peace
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