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Dadi Kewl 05-23-03 08:10 AM

Keyboard Dimensions (a burst of creativity)
 
Ive ENTERed a world in which i cant BACK-SPACE_
SHIFTin letters to get my CAPS straight
Got no CTRL of what I posses in cyber space
yet I still try to ESCAPE_punchin digital pixel gates
My hands get NUM_and My (Paws)Pause-BREAK
wanna get HOME but Im alone in raw weight
Heart beatin_like someones readin my life like chapters in excessive speeds SCROLLin a PAGE
How could Diverse worlds reverse or ALTernate?
I dont know where Im @ but Theres a huge %_im ^ against my fate
+ all my life I felt i was great_Commin at digital visuals faster then lights speed rate
Effortlessly facin hits like feathers on speed ways
Even the words_I INSERT_Reverse_like #3_Backwards

Its not the same_Im like a WINDOW_always feelin the PANE
No HELP yet I still exceed in this game

Atetrack define' 05-23-03 08:31 AM

ohhhhh clevernesssss......yuhuh...i liked it,coz its clever an all.....nice lil spit,wouldnt get much longer,only so many keys on a keyboard,but yeah,i liked the idea you ahd,was a clever one....keep it up..

bimsillah

liked the paws(pause) line

§olja*Lyricist 05-23-03 10:39 AM

nice stuff ill creativity

Bmack 05-23-03 10:40 AM

Very good topic, This is a true "Key"style...Mad props...I like the creativity..hope to see some more from you.

Dadi Kewl 05-23-03 12:35 PM

Uppin fo some mo feedback

Bash 05-23-03 12:40 PM

Lol.......................This was Ill dawg.....................................

Dadi Kewl 05-23-03 09:58 PM

Uppin

Poppa Kap 05-23-03 10:08 PM

same as what most peeps have sed-clever idea.....it cud be reall hard but it be better if it was loner but i gess it kinda stretches......nice tho

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Slik 05-23-03 11:02 PM

hahahahhaa....I LOVED IT!.....very creative...Keep spittin

8-off 05-23-03 11:36 PM

yea pound, good shit, i was feelin dat, and da whole verse made sense, none of dat out of wack bullshit, nice ass drop, short and sweet how i like them 2, keep da illness up

Chrit 05-23-03 11:50 PM

damn creative....

good spit............

wish I had some of that creativity... All I can ever seem to write about is shit from my life...........

Cykotic 05-24-03 10:53 AM

Nice track. Keep it up!

~RuThLEss~ 05-24-03 09:16 PM

Fosho Creativity shown on this Piece clever put together...........Nice Drop FAM


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