The end
 

Let life fall as it did once befor,
let rain become fire as it did once befor.
For in hell there is more then anough room for a sinner,
and the endless screams that burns makes the air thinner.
so bined me with steal and burn my flesh for i have felt true pain,
the screams of dead man is what keeps me sain.
The death and life in me is whats makes me the antichrist,
the world placed in my hand allshall end in one breath,
i dare you mantion the word heaven or the name christ.
for he has made me who i am in this reched wolrd full of hate,
and for that as i see him die i will wait.
till he calls me his lord,
and at that verry momment i will thenswpie the sword.
to end his life here is what is left.....
a miss interprited prophet
for i am the antichrist and shall end life with my last breath

Well, interesting topic, but I wasn't feeling it. Not only because of that but just because of the spelling, the flow, the whole thing. It could have been more interesting. The first few lines were ok but when I got to that "makes me the antichrist" line I lost all interest. Good thing it was short or I wouldn't have finished it all.

"and for that as i see him die i will wait.
till he calls me his lord,
and at that verry momment i will thenswpie the sword.
to end his life here is what is left..... "

Those lines were a little disturbing. I dunno if you're serious about this or just desperate for a topic to write on?

it was useing my creatve side,seeing if that would be a imagination you know like spawn but more evil

lol, oh. Well, you probably shouldn't listen to my response on this one then. You're talking about the One I follow so I definately wasn't feeling it. A secular person might like it.

Now it's just waiting to see if someone else will respond to it..people seem to be sleeping here.

yup they most not like the tittle or poem period oh well!

just waitin for more comments