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Van Ished 05-23-03 09:39 PM

...Analyze This...
 
Life
Brought in against your will, your are forced to live life,
parents, overcome with joy, forget that you will have strifes,
now you are alive, and you must persist in your goals,
but with life, there comes troubles, you must aviod these potholes,
but these troubles bring knowledge, and wisdom brings focus,
now you must swarm on your goals and gain a life you can cope with....

Conflict
Composite in structure, with a mind yet so feeble,
emotions are high strung and collide between people,
none can predict it, therefore it is an anticipated sequel,
but when it returns it draws blood like sharp needles,

Love
Fragile to touch, yet it seems sensless to engage in,
it resembles a masterpiece on paper, but where does this page end?
does it dwindle towrads the bottom, or ignite on every line?
does the length affect the passion or is this oblivious to time?
questions aside, one point remains sustained,
once it is found, the beholders connection forever remains,

Death
Most people fear it and find ways to supress this fear,
those who don't care are never stressed when it's near,
but panic resides consistent within those who are scared,
the seek out the strong ones and hope that they are paired,
but death brings peace, and when peace comes, time holds,
and with time paused, it enables a person to be at ease in their soul.........

Malcolm_X 05-24-03 04:21 PM

very nice piece. like tha style u used. feelin how u kinda jumped all over the place but made it all come together. flowed nice and made me think. feelin that. respect


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