hypnotize (my best beat so far)
 

this is my best beat IMO

click the link to listen to it.

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/3/myksbeatzmusic.htm

...thanks for the replys! wow im going to be the best producer on earth with all this help im getting!

come on! at least tell me how bad it is and how i could make it better.

ok it sounds like you made this in frutyloops correct? well you deffently need more going on but proper mixing and mastering will help out temendosly... also try useing some reverbs and delays compressions ect if you need help please contact me this is what i do for a living so hit me up...

yea i made this on fruity, i sent you a E-mail about all the mastering and mixing and all that

bsically..it keeps pausing and its annoying as fuck...id say a loop was off beat..but i dont htink u used any beats..so i ahve no clue why it keeps pausing like that....

yes...u need to get samples for fruity loops, and use thouse..not the samples that come with fruity...thats tip #1....

the bassline isnt half bad for a fruity synth line..lol...i couldnever ever ever make a synth bassline in fruity....

.pz.