Heavyweight Title:[Champ] Ill-Mental (1-0) vs. pHraNtiK (1-0)
 

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Verses by Tuesday
Voting ends Thursday

Topic...

With my last breath

word.
(crown me the new champ.)

i checked saturday morning to make sure the new battles werent up cause i was goin on a trip, how can check in be only 2 days?

Yo whatever, this is your battle, changin' name, drop by tommarrow aight.

This is squeaky clean now, hey Tik, in the future, don't unstick this aight.

(i didnt unstick it.. will edit with verse when mental posts)

i did that on accident...
i messed up cleaning it...

my bad! :)

Happy birthday dear James…

His names James and he’s turning 24
But he’s away from home fightin the war
Publically its done but behind the scenes
Kids are actin’ up and doin mean things
Hate crimes, murder, civil unrest proceeding
So James devoted his life to a job of peacekeeping
For International equality he patrols the land
The sun burning hot left the sand lightly tanned
Sweat drips off his brow as he ends his shift
Heads home, checks the mail and receives his gift
‘To james, with love, the birthday boy of 24’
‘from home, with care, best wishes and more’
He opens it up excitedly ripping the tape
Lifts the cover to find a piece of birthday cake
With a candle neatly placed right in the core
He lays it on his desk and shuts his door
He grabs his lighter and sparks the fuse
But before he blows it out he checks the news
More war, more fighting; it must end, no doubt
So with his last breath he blew the candle out
With a wish to end war, to grant world peace
His last breathe of air caused existence to cease

…Happy Birthday to you

ok i just got home, about to key one real fast and post it up, i'll have it done b4 midnight

Im constantly lookin over my shoulder each day-
cause i know that he is stalkin me, sharpening his blade\
Gotta stay on my toes cause i never know when he'll strike-
he's plottin the scene against me, waitin untill i cant fight\
He wants to see me sick and weak, cause thats when im easy prey-
but i dont let him run my life cause its mine, i mold it like its clay\
I see him watchin me late at night, when i'm tryin ta get some rest-
but i know that if i slip for a second, he'll take my last breath\
My whole family has fallin, no thanks to this dark creature-
he's made me realize that no-ones safe, my father was a preacher\
He's always settin traps, tryin ta hunt me like its a game-
i can never sit in silence, cause he's always callin out my name\
He's every where i look, i can even see him when i close my eyes-
he's got me confusin my dreams with reality, but i keep him surprised\
Every time he thinks he's got me, i find a way for me to shake loose-
i know that one day he'll get me, he's slowly tightening the neuce\
But i'll stand proud, fightin him untill i at last meet my death-
but he'll get resistance from me, untill i let out my very last breath\


ok im done, its late....... i dunno

TIK gets my vote.............................................. ....

i liked his concept betta.............his vocab..........his flow...........
ill-mental i think u woulda dun a better job if u had more time......
damn son sorry but this does sound like i'm D/Ring but its not

tik u get my vote

TIK gets ma vote....

ill if your had mo time n all maybe uda been better but tik brought it deadly cold, ill flow ill wordplay, this dope ryme woulda beat most at their best...

pHraNtiK in his verse showed what I'd like to call, "Maximum Dopenuss". His was fucking tight. I think that tiK can safely say "RBTL Champion"

Vote=pHraNtiK

its not as close as all u are sayin....
i thought ill's verse was nice.....but Tik's just edged it for me
liked the concept of both....but tik's was more original
nice flow from both.....good vocab from both........
both well told.....but Tik's story just came across better
good battle

4-0
*takes the crown and places it on his own head*

uppin for a blow out.... nice verse mental.. :)