KerrDezzy (1-0) vs. T_Pound£ (0-0)
 

Check in's by Sunday
Verses by Tuesday
Voting ends Thursday

Topic...
Like a sore thumb

yo jus checkin in, wonderin when ya gon' spit t pound?
this gon' be a good challange
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Checkin in.....

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My heart Throbbing like a sore thumb, the hammer that hit it still shakin from the reprocussions//
My soul Cussin at it, and the nail quietly laughin and discussin' the hit//
The wood flipt and lied on the floor pointin at my swollen Feelings//
wouldn't have been so bad if my world hadn't jus dropped from tha ceiling//
Who would have thought kneeling could cause such pain//
If i hadn't proposed it would still be the same, still sane//
but the replie was in vain, she thought she was to good for me//
She was the only girl i ever loved, thought she was heavenly//
when really she was jus gonna take my love and just throw it back at me//
Reality is a Tragedy, But when most storeys turn out happy this one just ends//
and wheather it consumes you depends on the support of your freinds//
they can bring you happiness and help you to defend....yourself from letting this misery re-offend//
You gotta change and blend, and learn to accept//

and i bet you would never have thought a sore thumb could have this affect//

if ya up my ass too long and recieve-a-sore-thumb,
it throbs like balls when it needs-to-cum,
i lace this rubba band around it and it turns black-n-blue,
the blood ain't circulatin so it becomes-a-bruise,
the rest is left n swolls-up to look like a helium-filled-balloon,
wrap it and put cast on it til ya decide to reveal-your-exit-wounds,
i don't recieve the pain cuz i stay physically fit,
take a blood test on me and watch my blood alcohol
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don't take it from the sore thumb cuz it'll-sky-roket,
it isn't safe to come in contact wit somethin toxic once it reaches oxygen,
the pain grows on it like a mentally-insane-man when he gains his adrenalin,
i nailed-it-out for him but it hit em, some1 get him some penacilin,
the paramedics is needed cuz once the man has bleeded he becomes heated and starts his serial-killin,
to ease his pain i join him to smoke-a-j wit me n bob dillan,
rejected of any otha choice but to amputate,
contiplate if the wooden plate could take-the-place,
x-rays reveal like you it has multiple-fractures-n-brakes,
your like ya thumb cuz you just got outta placment,
i neva knew a sore thumb to you would result in an another hospital-patient

uppin this

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C'mon dont sleep

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kerrdezzy gets my vote here. he stayed on topic best flowed well and overall it was just a really good verse

uppin fo mo votes
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vote= T pound

more emotion in his, I thought it was a more original way of looking at the topic. Kerr, your verse was good, but it seemed too...shit whats the word....forced. Like you didn't mean it.
I was just feelin T's more....
oh yeah, and the bob dylan line was ill, I fucking love that guy
Peace

yeah t-pound gets my vote
was feeling his verse more........didn't really like kerdezzy's verse much
pretty much same reasons as under stated^

Uppin Votez

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ight, i don't really agree wit the last 2 votes here but keep them comin............................................. ......................................

Good Battle Yo.....Much Respect To Both........Both I'm Gonna Come Real On This..............Kerr.....U Had Nice Lines And Used
Good Wordplay But T-Pound Was Actually More On The Subject Of A Sore Thumb<-----which by the way is another gay topic.......U Cool Wit Me And All....And I Don't Even Like T-Pound Becuz Hes Gay But I'm Leanin Towards More His Way........

ight thanks fo the vote, i think i stayed good on topic but... whateva, keep them comin.......................................