ålphå bë† Vs. Feeble Minded
 

15 line max.(but im doin about 10)
first to 5
No DR Votes
No Crew Voes
Due Tuesday by 11:59PM
Dun matter who drops first


uNo

due tuesday? what the fuck...it is satuday for christs sake....whateverany way, you drop fist................and i asked for a newbie, but whatever....................ur going first tho, and i will ot feed off of ur verses....and im only waiting 30 minutes...it shouldnt take longer than that...otherwise this battle is off aight...


LETS GET IT STARTED SPIT.

well you said you needed time plus this isnt the only site that im at.i do have other things to tend to so thats why i gave so much time but since you'd rather battle a newb the this battle is off.

haha.....u make it seem like i am turning this battle down................but if you hve better things t do than why challenge me in the first place?????????????????????

you should be able to write it in 30 minutes..........................
THA ISWH I LABELED I WHO WANTS TO SPIT NOW.....NOT WO WANTS TO SPIT BY TUESDAY...)


comon man....i know u can battle me now.....reply please..........

i be twistin up the sickness like double helical depictions;
rematch? the dotted line, suggest you re-sign like president Nixon...
trust me, you need to make like spiders, and stick to anything but the web...
Fatality! FINISH HIM...his health meter's in the RED!!!
comin' off the top, hittin' hard, like Bungee jumpers, wit snapped cords;
join the crowd, my dick's somethin everyone's ridin' on, like a FORD...
the syllables you display are...gay...my metaphors are double edged swords;
kid, you couldn't come off the wall...if you were particle board...
I'm on some homocide shit, you on that homo - side tip;
basically, I'm a dominatrix, I professionally deal ass-whips...
ya punches is played, dogg, do us a favor...and Quit;

hows that?....i think im gettin better.

ok it was good...sorry i just saw it....ima go in a few minutes.......................................

its a sad fact that losers also always have to be some of the most pathetic contestents/
my flow makes u look like a 'mis-match' that cant 'add', cuz u couldnt 'add'-'dress' it/
my verbal 'bullets' are deadly, wear a bulletproof vest but u still wont be able to 'chest' it/
my flow, the devil possessed it, you must be a man-of-god cuz u sound like you were molested/
im a one man firing squad, to win is requiring fraud, i fuck rappers up in the blink-of-an-eye/
the forum's inspiring god, so dont bother to try, thats bordering on the brink-of-a-lie/
to show that im sly, i 'rip off his thigh', just to prove he has a 'lower figure'-than-mine/
and disfigure his spine, re-arrange its design, beat in his brain, to prove he cant configure-this-rhyme/
i write omens, sent by the divine, i write this 'carefully' because his rhymes arent as 'neat' as my lines/
i show men that i will rip of their legs to de'feet' them and cut off their 'height' as a sign/
finally, when i take the time to respond, you'll get down on your knees and worship my pen as a wand/
the fact that i am benevolent, becomes pretty evident when i smash alpha bet and all superiors as evidence/

sorry...my net is messing up...i had to restart twice........

VOTES

both ya'll came nice as hell, but feeble's shit was just better
dont get me wrong alpha you came hella nice
the come off the wall was orginal, the side-tip line was a nice personal but not really a hard hittin punch.

feeble just came better like with the punches aadd-dress reference

This one was easy. Feeble Minded's lines were dope great rhymes, and i think half of the abcs (alpha bet) couldn't rhyme.

my vote= Feeble Minded

but 4 alpha bet i think he still had some great punches but i still have to give it to feeble minded
i pressed the submitbutton by accident

sorry can't post don't have 100 yet but feeble wins !

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...9812#post459812

Feeble had some mad multies and shit but im gonna go wit Alpha because this line from Feeble:[i show men that i will rip of their legs to de'feet' them ] is in the wackness emergency center under the sticky

bullshit...then it was stolen from me...that shit aint fair....and hoiw you gonna sa that line is whack............................................. ......................maybe he put it in tere to show people HOW TOI RAP...ad that line ismos defmine...so dont vote against me for that, that is bullshit...

Feeble had some mad multies and shit but im gonna go wit Alpha because this line from Feeble:[i show men that i will rip of their legs to de'feet' them ] is in the wackness emergency center under the sticky :http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=44714

look down at the bottom of the first post, this guys bitin'

vote: Alpha

damn good battle u2, but feeble came out on top with this one....he came much harder and his wordplay was hott.....good shit feeble, u really improved since we last battled...I'm gonna need a rematch tho....in a couple o dayz I"ll holla at ya