just a keystyle
 

who in this world think they fuck with the odd/
ya'll dyslectic cause ya'll call me a dog i'm otherwise know as a god/
i penetrate the mind when i ventelate my rhymes/
and demostrate the divine lyrical power in my lines/
i'm both the hottest and coldest compare me to bengay/
or i could just put 23 shots to your chest and back like MJ/
i spit the hottest shit that any man could mannage/
and you can't OVER RUN my style until you actually UNDERSTAND IT/
damn it man don't make me have to kick you accross the planet/
i'll kick you while doin a hand stand while only one hand's planted/
and jump back with a second kick into your nose/
damage your throat beat you with you shoes and hang you with your clothes/
then unzip my pants and start pissin on your wounds/
and get even more vicious up under a full moon/
when i transform back into my original state/
a lyrical deamon who uses battles for bait/
and feast and rip the worst up to the fuckin realest/
shit i'll rip myself just to proove that i've ripped the illest/
i be the new hip-hop inVADER i don't need to be DARTH/
i'm surgical like, i can see if you got heart/
so fuck wit me if you dare i'll even give you the chance/
but your shit'll be over with once i give you a glance/
cause you can run, rap, flow, rhyme as fast as you can/
but you can't catch me cause i'm the gingerbread man/
i'll hit you up or fill you up when my gun's drawn/
leavin mad bodies all over your front lawn/
and i don't do my dirty work i'll let my blade face you/
and i'm a lazy motha fucka i'll let my bullets chase you/
call my my bluff check and see if i won't pull it/
just know that your chest is a good place to hide my bullets/

fuck it that's all i can come up with right now

not bad....

worplay and punches werent bad.....

but anyone can write verses like this...

it'll be interesting to see how you do in a battle where the focus changes to punches and personals

keep writing man

and check out "The Life I Lead"
its my first open mic

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i like how ya'll are just lookin and not postin any replies

damn ya'll steady sleepin on this shit reply man shit

It was fairly good yo.....acutually i liked it.....word play was good...along wit flow....lookin forward to your others.....check out mine....."dad this song is for you" or somethin i forgot the title...haha

aight now it's been an entire day since i've been here and still no replies wtf is goin on

This drop was Aight...........It was Simple....................But i liked tha way u put ur lines 2gether...........I liked it dawg.........Keep spittin

this shit is pissin my off all ya'll is sleepin

Re: just a keystyle
 

HOt........................................

good lookin on the reply

ok ya'll still sleepin on this shit where ya'll at

tight..........good wordplay...........you got potential duke........good..keep spittin

oddly, what do you mean thats all you could think of?
haha.. fuckin lyin loser

here we go

i can just picture you sittin at your desk/
tryna come up with them rhymes, tryin your best/
how long did it take? 2 or 3 weeks?/
you know what you came up with? a great fuckin mess/
i aint scared of you, even if this shits off my head/
ill still freestyle and rap untill you lie dead/
vote for this loser..... and youre a fool/
he can rhyme, but hes missin the most important tool/
imagination, hit me with some personal shit/
instead of havin to work and work for your spits/
ill spit you to death/ till i got no breath/
sorry if youre hurt dude/ now ill rip out your chest/
you dunno me yet, im comin out of the mist see/
hit me back fagget/ come on bitch hit me!!!

come bitch hit me, arent you awake man?/
what the fuck you doin, lyin down shakin?/
youre takin so long... so damn slow/
im sittin here watchin my fuckin hairs grow/
hurry up dude, and you were complainin?/
im the rap king bitch, youre just plain man..