Dad, This is your song...(short song)
 

This is about my dad...My parents are divorced....You'll get it...Its a short song...
Kinda quick writing, so dont expect any "WOW!" vocab...I'm going to you know, fix it, later....ight....

So many things in this world that i fear, like losing someone, cuz i only see my dad bout 12 tiems a year. But in my heart, i always know hes here, but i remember when i was five, he drove away, only leavin me wit tears//

My mom and him, they never hit it off, i was only a child, and the only time i saw them communicate, is when they faught, and it always ended up with the sirens and the cops//
-It was to much for me...Feel it....-

Hook:
My life is not a fairy tale, its no where perfect..
I wanna be the evil man, i wanna "murder" it
But i gotta be here for him, we need to bond
cuz my pops, hes old, but hes also strong
so this is for you dad, this is your song

Now my pops is all alone, and my mom married a fag, he thinks hes family, but i aint never callin him "dad", hes tries to impress me, look kate, i'm hip, i'm fab!....well fuck you, your not ever gonna be remembered until your stabbed!!//

And i dont care how many times he fucked my mom, i just want him fuckin outta here, up-and-gone, cuz you just a fuckin pot head, yeah i found your bong, i want you dead, and my last words to you are "fuck you and so long"//

Hook: X2

Everyday goes by and my dad gets bolder and bolder, he has a strong heart, but i still remember hes gettin older and older, and as each day progresses, its gettin colder and colder, but dad, its ok, i know you still love her//
-Dont give up dad, you'll find someone-

Hook:X1

-Life can be easy, just follow your heart
life can be simple, never let it tear you apart-

Love you Dad.....


No hatin please....

Just comments....
Thanks

Damn am feelin tha Emotions in this Piece very imaginary....na'mean....shit my folks divorced long time ago.....i know is hard nice drop am feelin the contend.................

Nice shit FAM

thanks yo.....feelin it......god damn.....emotional....

dis shit is plain and simple on a plate shit, some ppl go on bout elivating n shit, well sometimes fuck dat and spit it, i was feelin dis here, nise drop dawg..
dis was tight..
And i dont care how many times he fucked my mom, i just want him fuckin outta here, up-and-gone, cuz you just a fuckin pot head, yeah i found your bong, i want you dead, and my last words to you are "fuck you and so long"//

dats right man....I wasnt tryin to impress anyone wit da vocab...I"m just tellin it straight out.....

hell yea

Uppin fo anymore comments.......

brought tears to my eyes it's nice to see so much talent from a femcee that shit was onpoint and it let's me know because you gave a warning to the lack of vocab that you must have some other real and ill shit so do what you do ma keep that shit comin

thanks dawg....tryin to rep the femcees out there, we got more talent than you think, if you wanna see one of my better raps...umm i'll up them on the open mic...so check it...payce and thank you

felt this piece...
glad to see you just got on the mic and spit it...
was a tight piece...
fuck big words when you can get your point across...
nice piece

Felt that one..... damn.... liked it though....