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Grim85 05-24-03 10:22 PM

Grim85 v. Slik
 
15 to 20 lines you spit first GL

Slik 05-24-03 10:38 PM

ight....
Check it...yo yo....


Somehow you get by in here wit using "2" words as a "sentence"//1
but when u see my "rhymes", you lookin at "perfection"//2
but u in da wrong "section", u need to "elevate", but thats gonna take more than a "few lessons"//3
and no u tryin to be "messin", well sorry i aint "dirty", so dont be askin me fo any "confessions"//4
Im sick of niggas like you who think they so good, but only got 2 words, u could never come up wit more//5
i know u "stealin" and "bitin" rhymes, still thats somethin u can "afford"//6
but u still prayin to "lord", please this girl gettin on my "nerves", and its all cuz im grabbin ya by yo "spinal cord"//7
and niggasmake fun of u cuz u havent got da pussy, and u ahvent got anything but a fuckin "look see"//8
cuz no one wants a man who says "maybe" when they lookin fo da sex and "money"//9
and the only thing thats "funny" is when u look in da mirror, and u cant member the name of ur "honey"//10


omg weakk....but hey i'm tired...sorry fo that guys...i apologize really...butanways i gota get some sleep...payce

DarkForce 05-24-03 10:39 PM

I'll vote for this shit when yall finish....vote for mine too pleaz

DarkForce vs. Carsonjet
DarkForce vs. Weezy
DarkForce vs. The Real Terror

Slik 05-24-03 10:40 PM

sorry that i didnt do 15...i had 10....i had to get off though....but post up...payce and goodnight......................................... .................................................. .................................................. ................................

Slik 05-24-03 10:49 PM

would u just post....so i can go to bed....so i know ur not a fuckin no show.............................................. .................................................. ............................

DaMoon 05-24-03 10:51 PM

ill hit this shit up once da other dude spits......................
holla..........................................

Slik 05-24-03 11:08 PM

sick of this no sho shit....whatever i'm out....payce...................................... .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. ......................................

Grim85 05-24-03 11:10 PM

the two-liners where bullshit u nitwit thinking i was someone u could outwit/1
calling me a motherfucking girl when ur really the one wit the clit whos tryin to spit/2
storming into this battle thinking that the win would be automatic/3
in reality i came in here dropping all this shit cuzing static/4
in this rap game thts sink or swim u wont even float/5
wht the hell is wit all of this gay motherfucking "quotes"/6
this motherfucker is just another wannabe tupac, talkin shit like he owned a glock/ 7
bitch look at the motherfuckin clock, and its already past this bitches bed time, pussy dont talk/8
jayk lend me ur Ak so i can take this bitch out tonite, thinkin he can hand it to me in a fight/9
fucker at the end of this nite all ull be seeing is a tunnel and at the end is the fuckin lite/10

Slik 05-24-03 11:13 PM

wow took some major prewrite huh.....damn....haha.....well now that it took you an hour to prewrite and 2min to do my "tired' shit.l....votes...

Grim85 05-24-03 11:15 PM

srry it took so long my gay friend turned off my comp and just to tlet u no i aint got no beef wit u, i no u probably better and actually think some of ya shits pretty dope

Slik 05-24-03 11:21 PM

its ight man...i just hate when people prewrite shit....but i know what its like yo................lets get some votes............................................. ...........

H4iKU 05-24-03 11:23 PM

well, this wasnt close in my eyes. being the other cat seems to be newb i think slik took this one. with better wordplay and flow. i didnt feel the other cat At all. but, thas how i was when i started out so dont sweat it. vote=slik^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

Grim85 05-24-03 11:23 PM

no prewright here man, i had to make it up all over again i was fucking killing my friend for a few mins 2 before i started again. now i got blood all over my keyboard!

Slik 05-24-03 11:25 PM

ight ight....yo my shit aint so good cuz i'm dead tired...keep the votes comin...and i apologize to everone again fo readin my shit....It came out so bad...but i guess its ight fo dis battle

DarkHisTory 05-24-03 11:30 PM

i liked slik in this battle her verse out punched the hell out of grim
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