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INFAMOUSEG187 05-25-03 04:27 PM

check it out give me back some input
 
INTRO:

When the battlemasta spits its a big disasta/ thats why every one is calling me the masta/while i am being praised becuase i am the best rapsta/ all you fake rappers need to quit and become a news casta/ maybe they will get reconized doing that a whole lot fasta/

WARM UP:

because everyone is a basterd thats why ya'll don't gleam/ just hear the burst of my glock and ya'll ears 'll start to bleed / while i sit back and watch my pitts(pittbulls) start ripping out spleens(lower intestense)/ im not like all ya'll fakes i don't get on my knees/ ya'll need to stop nibbling on bozacks like rats does chees/ thats why you all owe the mods a bunch off fees/ just cover them up in honey and feed them to bees/ i bet they will start yelling and beggin you please/

FLOWING:

alright now i am am going to cease and chill/ stab you all in the back and watch ya'lls body start to thrill/ my favorite thing to do is run around and kill/ all my murders is nothing but a big old schrill/ like putting holes in ya'lls body with an electrical drill/ like you been taking and desintigrating pill/

END:

u know ya'll can't handle a bill that why you are starting to dicentgrate(dissapear)/ this will be you last time you'll be able to masturbate/ in a while ya'll will look like a fly start to regurgitate(through up)/ watch ya'll start to fill up with fate/ and see you start floating and land inside the hell gates//

ALRIGHT TELL ME WHAT YA'LL THINK AIGHT

ThaUnForGottin 05-25-03 04:36 PM

Werd that was good homie but you need to change up tha flow alittle more

INFAMOUSEG187 05-25-03 04:44 PM

werd up alright dawg thanks

Bash 05-25-03 04:46 PM

This drop was Aight for a Newbie............Lyrics were kinda of simple..........And dont type ur drops in paragraph form.................................Return da favour , By checkin out my boy infinite22's drop..........Its called B.R.E Presentz: For the Soldiers

INFAMOUSEG187 05-25-03 05:01 PM

ALRIGHT YO THANKS FOR THE INPUT

INFAMOUSEG187 05-25-03 05:17 PM

keep up the input

ThaUnForGottin 05-25-03 05:44 PM

Yo nigga when you wanna battle

ThaUnForGottin 05-25-03 05:46 PM

jus hit me up witta PM ~n~ set it up in tha battle section u spit first and i'll get back to ya

INFAMOUSEG187 05-25-03 06:07 PM

ALRIGHT WE'LL DO IT TOMMOROW I AM ABOUT TO LEAVE SO HIT ME BACK ALRIGHT


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