Choked
 

This White Boy's hated, Im playin up on stage.
*Elevation From My Last Rhyme* (Crazy Rage)

Turn the page, I bust outta my cage, by the *Bullat* of success the way i was raised.

Gunned Down. Phsycopathic, brain be actin crazier than
*Shady* bitch took my name from West Craven. Behaven unbelieveable, Undefeadable, finally chokin cuz the challenger aint readable.

Im tearin at my hair, wonderin should I say *Fuck It* would the crowd even care.

Spittin my life sentence to *Death Row* on this open Mic,
Brainz frozen wit *Antisipation and notin to write*

Freestyled *GAngsta*, In school I be the prankster, back up in Flint we don't play wit them Wankstas.

I got it down pat, think I know what Im sayin but my brain has gone wack. I can't act or spit, crazy shit, Eyes dialated cuz my head is lit.

Forget it back to the battle, I can't let this *Emcee* make my brains rattle.

Im up on stage bro I cant *Choke*
there goes my career like I was *Tone Loc*

Aight Im white bitch i know I aint black, It's down pat, fuck it I drop the mic down flat, as I hear laugs at my fuckin back, I turn around and cock the fuckin Gat!!

(Gun Shots reing in the City fo pain, ~ShEmY~ mothafuckas you know my name!)

i thought this was dissapointingly wack for some1 with a record like that, must be better at battles

How u gonna say this is wack? w/e. I didnt think it was but ok. Maybe I was wrong.

not wack, pretty good actually

^^^^Word..........This piece was a Big dissapointment...............I think u can do better man..................This piece was whack

ur right i shoulda gave some explenation sorry

i thought tha topic was mad played, played to tha point that its pretty much wack

tha rhymes were aiight but what they were sayin was just kinda dumb i thought

Forget it back to the battle, I can't let this *Emcee* make my brains rattle.


Im tearin at my hair, wonderin should I say *Fuck It* would the crowd even care.

Aight Im white bitch i know I aint black, It's down pat, fuck it I drop the mic down flat, as I hear laugs at my fuckin back, I turn around and cock the fuckin Gat!!

tha fact these stood on their own didnt help things either, plus that was ur second time sayin its down pat which is pretty simple and doesnt sound good being repeated in a sucha short verse

thats why i thought it was wack
im sure u can do better then this neway

put it in audio, it will shut em up.