Commin From Disciples Heart..
 

my heart cries from confusion pain and betrayal/wishin i could
turn back the hands of time and commit suicide in the cradle

every step i ever took was met with nuthin but destruction/fuck
instruction my life is in shambles no reason to look for construc-
tion

lies i've been recievin even before the beginnin of birth/i'm a
bastard filled wit hate nobody ever put disciple first

i fear for my seed i planted scared that he will follow in my path/
tellin my son don't ever be like me cuz my heart is filled with
lustful desires and wrath

i dwell alone for the reason my actions i cannot control/livin in
the system of bail bond probation and parole

who can help me Jehovah? then why did i cut numerous veins/
he says the flesh is weak can he feel weakness bein caused by
my pain

why stop the rain when for 23 years i've been goin thru storms/
been crawlin on my belly i wasn't born human i was born a worm

got married for the wrong reasons just cuz she carried my child/
i tried actin black and mild till i came home caught her in the act
of bein wet and wild

popo wanna restrain me if this wuz old testament she would've
been stoned/but nah she's the victim i can't even touch the
nigga that she boned

damn disciples deep nah disciple is rightfully scorned/i been
beaten and bruised i been tattered and horned

fuck it though i'ma live my life to the very end/if i'm my worst
enemy then know disciple ain't acceptin no friends.......













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the lyrics were good overall, some a lil corny but good overall and it would be intresting to hear it performed with the right beat and shit

Nice spit man. Yo bro I know u think Im gay and shit but I dont want no beef between us juss cuz I didnt spit in that fuckin battle. Aight man. No beef.

Anyway, that was a hard verse. Like how it expresses all of your pain and shit. If thats all true than man uv'e had a rough life. I feel yah.

^^ain't no beef........appreciate the comments tho.......

nice 13th, damn dat was deep, expressin ya feelings n shit,
do ya thang
-Tory

u cant really jusge shit from the heart n u cant say its wack... its deep tho i liked ur opener a lot n the rest of ur verse was killer too.... keep doing this stay up homie

uppin for thoughts on this quick piece.......

THIS WUS THE WEAKEST SHIT EVA 13.............LOOOL naah you my boy am fuckin wit ya................SICK CONTEND Loved the emotions in this piece...............sick drop...


Wun

peep mine Womens Worth