C.o.n.f.u.s.i.o.n.
 

C- cant concentrate contemptly...close calls continue to tempt me.

O- only offer i operate w/ ordinance...is offered w/ no coordinance.

N- non-negotiable contracts nag me...naughty nannys like to tag me.

F- fat figures formulate finely...faggots should forget about fonts untimley.

U- under dogs use tha union to unite...usually i utilize unique methods despite.

S-Someones shitty syndicate...so i smoke slowly and flows-be intricate.

I- indicating an imbalance on my inner consciounce...illiterate idiots invite tha non sense.

O- oh my another "o"...only now im blazed off dro.

N- nitpickers dont rely on money non spent and dillusioned...now i know the meaning of Confusion.

I've never read one like this. I thought the style you wrote it was pretty good. It seemed like you were just voicing your thoughts really quick. I liked the content and flow. The word usage was good too. Overall this was a good post.

I'll go ahead and up this for you while I'm at it ;)

O- oh my another "o"...only now im blazed off dro.

that line made me think that you had no idea what to write there and just put any old shit it.....if your doing shit like this you atleast have to be able to think on the spot

i made it like that purposly due to the fact i already had 1 0, thanks for the replys, uppin^^^