Beauty, heartbreak
 

So much Beauty, a tear comes to my eyes
As it rolls down my cheeks, this i realise
I am in love, i see nothing but splendour
Then i look in your eyes, perfectly rendered

So much perfection, my throat swells
The soft skin, so smooth and musical, i've fell
The flowing hair, so perfect, amazing and attractive
My appreciation insatiable, but your heart inactive

An angel, the definition, maybe even God
A powerful mystery, yet a blaspheme in words
Your elegance as you flow past me, eyes shining brightly
Your soft eratic scent following excites me

Dear God i love you, you are the epitome of perfection
The ocean of your eyes, your fair hair, your complexion
The setting sun, the spring flowers, the soft autumn breeze
All the worlds beauty is you, but you don't love me

As my heart is shattered, dreams devoured, a tear comes to my eyes
After all this pain subsides, the beauty of angels rejects me this i realise.

What do you think people? I've beared some true feelings

I thought it was really good. I can actually FEEL what you were saying. You know how to put your feelings across well. I really liked it...

peAce

Thanks, that was true that's why, i still see the girl, i don't know if she feels what i do, but i lost some hope, so i just released it

Well, I wish you two luck. I hope she feels the same about you. And keep up the good poems

peAce

tight shit, show her the poem, it may do something for you...