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Beauty, heartbreak
So much Beauty, a tear comes to my eyes
As it rolls down my cheeks, this i realise I am in love, i see nothing but splendour Then i look in your eyes, perfectly rendered So much perfection, my throat swells The soft skin, so smooth and musical, i've fell The flowing hair, so perfect, amazing and attractive My appreciation insatiable, but your heart inactive An angel, the definition, maybe even God A powerful mystery, yet a blaspheme in words Your elegance as you flow past me, eyes shining brightly Your soft eratic scent following excites me Dear God i love you, you are the epitome of perfection The ocean of your eyes, your fair hair, your complexion The setting sun, the spring flowers, the soft autumn breeze All the worlds beauty is you, but you don't love me As my heart is shattered, dreams devoured, a tear comes to my eyes After all this pain subsides, the beauty of angels rejects me this i realise. |
What do you think people? I've beared some true feelings
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I thought it was really good. I can actually FEEL what you were saying. You know how to put your feelings across well. I really liked it...
peAce |
Thanks, that was true that's why, i still see the girl, i don't know if she feels what i do, but i lost some hope, so i just released it
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Well, I wish you two luck. I hope she feels the same about you. And keep up the good poems
peAce |
tight shit, show her the poem, it may do something for you...
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