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smokedout411 05-27-03 12:10 AM

"Whore Number 4"
 
your a bitch, a hoe, i won't take anymore
i lost your love so fuck you bitch is over
i fucked you a forgot about you
for a week or two
till you called my house crying i dont want to be with you
but i said in a response i love you i've just been busy
so you said ok... i still love you baby
but its all a fucking joke i laughed when i hung up the phone
i told my buddies you called and told um you's nothin but a hoe
cause i know that you like it from the side of my window
thats right bitch i know you dont get alot from the indoor
i wont take the shit no more
get the fuck outta here whore
there's no more room for you
so clean yourself up and go cry in your bedroom
take a look at the pictures, miss what you use to have
i just wish you knew what i think when you sobbin sad
but i dont care no more
your just another fucking whore
i cant take your cries, i wish you'd stop and fuckin die
i wont see it no more, you suckin my dick on the floor
further more i dont wanna see your nasty clit hangin on the floor



yet again another rhyme outta my little black book of rhymes.. haha wrote it up after i hooked up with this nasty ass girl from school.

C-Section 05-27-03 12:54 AM

this is extremly wack! please elevate, the flow sounds like it was written in 1980, i could free style better then that.......

keep posting here cause thats the only way you will get better, your little black rhyme books cant tell you how wack you are but we can.......dont take it in a bad way im just tring to help

R-Sinic Jaws 05-27-03 01:41 AM

WEAK

smokedout411 05-27-03 01:52 PM

thankyou all for the feedback.... its an old rhyme yes it is... haha

Atetrack define' 05-27-03 03:03 PM

lmao at flu.....tis true,shits weak...need to up,stuck in the 80`s...but the 80`s waqs a funny time,sugar hill gang makes me laugh,and feel all funky...yes...funky..


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