The Dark Blue
 

The jig is up so let me tell you what pussy has popped..
The Rampart district is gettn rocked by dirty ass cops..\
That shield they wear makes them feel untouchable makin stops.
Nothing new in the block, we still making it until da last fence is hopped.. Pigs trying to take mine and plant evidence for a crooked crime.. Punk muthafuckas think i'm blind, i grew up to watch my behind.. Nothing better to do but fuck with the F.O.T.M crew, enjoy a cold brew in a hot L.A day.. With no bad intentions on our mind, just enjoy these Los Angeles Times, writing rymes about the ghetto life.. It is always ruined in any given second when you hear sirens coming towards our derection.. I get up like my dick getting an irrection.. Next think u know, they sorround us and block the intersection.. To much bullshit to call for back up.. We don't even bang, or slang, just chilling it cool in tha gang..\
Why even bother to call a fucking helicopter, to make yall look proper? That is all what yall want, stripes for little petty crimes you busted.. I am just disgusted how tha whole system is full of nonsense and corrupt indulgance in their circunfrence of evil men..\ How come i don't see dat shit in beverly hills, rodeo drive and all dat white spill../ Ask that question to yourself if you ever been delt by these Coppas with batman belts../ To many clues to explain the sadness with tha blues.. Trust yourself if you livin in the gutter's shoes.. Fuck tha news making a fuss mainly directed on minorities in middle class parts of the city's charts.. Homocides and rapes occasionally happen apart from our side of town.. Cuz in the Concrete jungle, we together black and brown join together by mutual respect.. But Five O makes the racial tension progress.. Picking on people wit less money, not even enough to fill a childs tummy.. Porks know this, but they don't care to cut some slack on da family.. Racial profiling is how they distinguish our suspicion.. You may look mexican or black, but its all up to their decision.. Thats how this life in the ghetto will always be, hiding from them like squirrels in a tree.. Fuck it, I stand free to say that justice in america aint on my steez so people if yall feel me, get off your knees.. I'm out like a feather in floating through the eye of the hurricanes breeze..

i did'nt like the way you structured it, made it hard toread at times!

but if catz'd read it they'd see you got hott flow, tight vocab and wordplay!

keep droppin them dawg!

who the fuck is this dickhead kriss krass
kriss kross your rhymes out, and get some class
only thing you could bust out wit is an ass
if this shit was a runnin race, youd for sure be dead last
you talk about gettin your dick up in a rhyme?
thats when i stopped readin.. didnt have the time

biatch

88nObOdY88: WTF is your problem man! kid comes out here lookin for some feedback on an tight piece and you diis him with something that even A2Z woulda been ashmed off!