yeah
 

polished myself up..... so im destined to shine-if i aint ahead of my time then everyone else is behind-thew rolex of rap resite...rhymes in brail and use them to battle mimes-write my name in cursive lines to get signed.
hate me or not ....fuck you!!!the words i choose to use-PUNISH-so imagine what the one's i dont.... could do-
stay ill regardless of between fwd and rwd-PLAY my tracks for porn and you still wouldnt be fucking with mine-
claim gully hoping you the felony kind- if you dont understand my life behind these bars then you never were convicted of a crime-
play tantra with rap-till filled over the brim above the rim then impregnate BUST ON every bitch on the map-
NONCENTZ world wide-human internet with intellect-and dialect-compound are combos when hooks and punch's collide-i keep myself gased so im here for the long ride-and i aint going stop till the tank rund dry-
fuck what you thought im raw with led-survive alive in battles and get left brain dead-
nigguz that scream ride or die and aint been around long enough to drive-not even on a record label already talking JIVE-
break you out in hives-you butter soft fagets get locked in a room of knives-come out commercial...doing skits for parkay to stretch your one minute of fame to five...but with nowhere to turn i scream no~way-
i dont need to fake it-if i see it i take it- but if i stripped you of your fabricated lifestyle then you be performing naked-
lets get it straight...but you play for the other team-besides i want you to hate.....pissen in a river is the only way you go mainstream.

hook: I DONT GIVE A FUCK..... AND THATS WHATS UP-
SPIT YOUR MOST RECYCLED LINES AND END UP IN A GARBAGE TRUCK-NON CENTZ HAS CAME-AND STAKED HIS CLAIM-SO IF YOU PLAYING RAP WHATCH YOU GET PIMPED IN THE GAME.

nice spit dawg..............
shit was tight.............
loved redin this piece...........
some funny shit in there too.........
keep rhymin....................

check my infumuz diss in open mic..............

fiori

Word Perfect...........as ussual always look forward of readin yo verse na'mean cuz u got some sick shit unlike i seen some of the other open mics.....but yours just SICK nice contend........overall
9/10 whole flow



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Dope shit dog, i think you got your own thang going.. fuck what anyone thinks, you just sound raw..

Da chorus was Whack though..........But tha Verse was Ill as hell

thats wuz up yo i appreciate the imput especielly bash that was real homie stay up and i'll be placing verse 2 on soon

as a matter of fact part 2 will be posted tonight

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holla

yo this shit was hott,not the best i read from you, but still good enough that i wan to see verse 2

nice spit some hit shit keeping it locked
return the favor

anymore