Take ya Bitch
 

yo this is for all of yall niggaz wit the model gurlz
backround music
My Love by the Diplomats
Im a take a bitch from unda ya armpit/
get delt wit quick/
ya man dont wanna fuck wit this/
aint nuthin he could do what/
cus you know you like my big ass dick and when i hot it from da butt/
cuss all yall niggaz better cuff ya gurlz/
i'll take ya money cars and ya bitch/
and all ya world/
listen baby gurl you the one im focused on/
zoomed on you to see whats going on/
the way i look at you shit i aint wrong/
give me a lap dance wit dem gucci thongs/
who the fuck can buy you diamond rings/
jersey dresses and a whole bunch on things/
fix you up wit nice herrrr (Hair)/
I like the way you shake it like thurr/
i'll be wit you through the fogg/
damn you soo beautiful like pharell and snoop dogg/
so a ya;lll rap niggaz wit the model gurlz/
play boy gurlz/
freky gurlz/
wit no herpeis and aids/
you can garantee she gon have my baby/

the remix and pt 2 comming soon

yeh your fuckin wack

wasn't feelin it at all!

elevate dawg!

SHIT WAS WHACK!!!!!!!!!!!!
 

that shit was........................................WHACK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Damn dawg. Seriously, you need to ELEVATE and dont bit lines cuz you bit Jay-Z's line the armpit thing.

some bullshit i wrote during school

I am sittn here in class/
dreaming of this fine peice of ass/
that just pasted me during my last class/
all i wanted to do was to blast a fat nut/
up into that fine butt/
i know that she might be a slut/
but so what/
that slut got the hottest butt/
to bust a fat nut into/
even tho that chick is some sorta jew/

wit rhymes like that you be gettin nobody..this one chick who aint interested lol..... a got ma man...and modelling shite.dont do it..moneys crap

i really wasn't talking about some girl it just rhymed sorry, that i was board during math class and started to just wright shit down gD ppl fucking hate`n to much!

yo Grim85----

ya got the Rhyme down--but bein new & shit I don't like ta dis others material---as 4 the too Much hatin----I think yer gettin what ya give--read yer posts again--Not to kind ta the ladies dawg-----& shit sayin yer gonna get evryone's girl-----that just be askin 4 hatin---
all n all---------keep writin------peace

got off to a weak start with my first battle
any advise on this one
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...15&pagenumber=1

Wizzy You're whack dawg........I expect better from u.............This piece was whack as hell