Gods Mysteries
 

like the last thing i dropped...i want pointers so when u see this can i have advice etc and ill expand on what i have......its a smaller version just so i can see what i need to improve...and if anyone finds this offencive it not ment 2 be...just confusin stuff bout God

thanks :) help me elevate

An unquestioned belief followed by a majority,
Yet minds have been relieved of his existence to a minority.
Obedience to a spiritual power is the definition of religion,
I sit back obediently awaiting my dreams to have a vision.
In my heart I want to believe, but my mind wants answers of mysteries,
Hypercritical statements and unclear lessons, makes me feel you don’t exist to me.

If pride is a sin, then how wrong is it for a priest to preach,
We learn from mistakes, so are sinners the best to teach.
We need to fight as a Christian, our faith should never be considered weak,
Yet you say if someone strikes you, offer him the other cheek.
If you are everywhere, then why do we need to attend church,
If you are all powerful, then why allow all this hurt.
Why use the effort, if sinners share a heaven with the sinless,
A life of crime and ignorance is welcomed to heaven with love and forgiveness.
So if we all go up to the same higher plain, then why do we have life on earth,
Why are we born sinners, our innocents as a baby is stained with sin at birth.
I don’t understand, why do we worship you on a place you met death,
The time I find out all the answers, will be the time I no longer need breath

HELP :)

I don't really have any tips for you to get better since you're better than me at writing.

This type of poem is the kind that I like to read, among lots of others. I like it when the writer asks a lot of questions and seems confused cause that's how I am. Though, I'm not confused about any of the things you're talking about here, but I used to be. So I felt this one.

I could actually help you understand a lot of the things you wonder about here, if you're really looking to understand it.

Anyways, good post. I'll be looking out for more from you here.

haha write thanks...i am religious just i used the points i thought most appeal to people bein confused of...tghanks for the feedback

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pointers ?