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well you wonder why im rappin//
cause guns arent what i use when mishaps happen//
even though im fastened and ready for blastin//
i know why your askin//
how long ill be lastin when my bullets start scratchin//
ya chest and neck to let blood start splashin//
in action i kill factions in closed caption as an assassin//
my girl drunk on her knees while my dick be flashin//
even in tha improper ways//
i hop up on stage//
enraged in my cage so i release this wave//
of an unrealistic plague that eats you for days//
and leaves you in the grotto with bones so hollow//
now you crew wont follow,so try again tomorrow//
lost-in-a-maze//
cant concentrate cause im off-in-a-daze//
from coughin-off-haze//
use my wrists to soften-up-blades//
atleast sometimes i feel drugs keep me on tha right track//
comin home a few hours late after tellin my girl ill be right back//
in fact i despise,those made of lies//
to fuck up tha lives,of those husbands and wives//
just feel like i could be cut up wit knives//
but forgive me for he who strives//
will ask not why and wont take bribes//
even on this fucked up side.

uppin^^^^^^^

hmm i thought it was aight, it started off real good but by the end it started kinda laggin but overall it was pretty good, keep writin peace kid.

uppin^^^^

yep^^... I agree. started off pretty decent, and started to fade towards the end.. stay up, practice, work on wordplay and vocab..