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Vanish (real nice beat)
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^^^^^^^
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uppp
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Upppp
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damna man any comments....anything....uppp
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it was straight i wasnt really feelin it. its better than i can do lol. so dont think im hatin. just needs work. perfection takes time kid.
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I thought it was all over the place and out of position
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OK this screams frutiyloops... big time... Dogg you dont want that but for real you need some mastering on this track and some sound tweaking so its not so fake sounding... If you want ill master it for free and show you what kind of talent i got ... contact me thou aim or yahoo if you can my contact info is in my profile peace
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wasn't feeling this at all, too simple, and too many claps
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th notes are all out of tune....u cant just play any notes together..when u have multiple instruments on a track they have to be in tune with each other...u cant play a c note...and an simple f sharp on another instrument..it just wont sound right....
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