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RJay 05-29-03 12:01 AM

Song cry 2 Remix
 
check it yo this is one verse from a song i writn wit Shemy(Whiterap19) tell me what you think

Song Cry2
Listen....all the things i done but th best thing i don was hae u as my numba one//
How the fuck im leave you out in the blue//
you was my main squeez i ws nothin with out you

I memba te day we used ta play//
listen ta CD n mak love ta Marvin Gaye
Like the way you moved ya hip in that special way//
you would drop like its hott like we a son soul train

You call m up real fast.. any time or place//
and i' drop everything juss ta see ya face
the lovn was great//i had ta fuck it up it the end of a lovly day

damn what i do now its my fault//you was my foundation i broke it apart//
i fee like a bum wit a benz as a shoppn cart//
not even GODS hands could mend ya broken heart

Hook: repeat 3X
I cant see em come in down my eyes but i gotta make this song
cry
( R-Jay is All in it)
(Shemy is All in it)
(BDP is allin it)

Black Diamond productions
Shemy - R-Jay

Spitzophrenic 05-29-03 07:16 AM

Yeh Not Bad At All Man,Work a Lil On Ya Vocab Tho... But Not a Bad Topic...

Peace.. Spitzophrenic

RJay 05-29-03 05:32 PM

yo hit thisup tell me ho ya feel bout it if you have the instumental ta song cry put it on and readthis shit aight.......

RJay 05-30-03 06:24 PM

yo tell me how yall feel on this aight .................................................. ............................

Sincere211 05-30-03 07:32 PM

nice lil song homie,like the kid above said,not too complex lyricaly but who cares shit sound nice n flows.do ur thing.1

RJay 05-30-03 09:17 PM

yo thanks man juss tryna a get y shit out keep hittn it up aight yo his song gonna be tight dont worry you know me

RJay 05-30-03 10:06 PM

yo keep hittn this song up an i needmore replys an opinons on tis song aight keep hittn it up......holla at cha boy

Accelerate 05-30-03 11:42 PM

this was an aight drop. def. needs work, but still good. return the favor and check my 2 pieces out if ya want, they called Not the average and lyrical slice and dice

RJay 05-31-03 12:05 AM

yo keep hittn this up aight ill return thefavor aight holla at cha boy
its the roc in here.....................1

Bash 05-31-03 12:07 AM

This drop was Aight dawg........Could have been better though.....Just elevate a lil mo.......U gon get better..........Return da favour , checkout my boy redragon's drop http://63.219.149.14/forum/showthre...&threadid=52130

Bash 05-31-03 01:15 PM

Why u always say ITS THE ROC IN HERE


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