something thats for a girl females may like it a lil more than tha guys in hea
 

heres to tha ones..tha ones always havin fun...tha one whos eyes shine in tha sun...tha one whos cryin when im done//
tha one whos emotionally caught up...sorry for tha old emotions i brought up...for those explosions i thought up//
for those depressive days i get...and expressive rage i fit//
even when those times seem everlastin...i feel unbalanced for never-askin//
how to try better...your my stars and weather...i would never wanna lose you ever//
even through tha problems we had...me doin drugs and your dad...even after your drinkin habit im glad//
that our past problems dont reignite...so this verse i recite...to give u pleasure and excite...you look devine in light...so for u i will fight...to keep you and i aiight.

Is this a true story, sound good, if it was true even better, nice DS, keep postin'

yea this was about a girl i was datin 4 years ago,we jus recently got back together

awww..that was good....the emotions are felt....the flow...is might be a little off but its nice..i liked it keep it up

^^^Um.. yeah, pretty much what shiznit said.^^^

I can't think of much else to add. Real heartfelt, but flow a bit off.

~Shalom~

feelin ur emotions.nice piece.cant add anythin else,its already been said.
peace

Feelin it, nice

I LIKED IT .IT WAS GOOD.CHECK OUT THIS BATTLE.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...5927#post505927