Last One For Katie...
 

Lol... Up and coming audio lyrics... I'm serious this time...

Thinkin' of what we used to be together/
Remember what you did to me, had to endure the weather/
Depression and alcohol, whoever would've thought you could be my downfall/
Stayin' up late all night makin phone calls, without you life just hit the wall/
Too weak to go on without my girl, would've died for you, gave the world/
MY heartbeat thumpin and pumpin when i see you, You just give me that somethin bein with you/
Palms sweaty, waiting for that sweet kiss, waitin for you to take me to eternal bliss/
I can still remember sittin' and laughin' on past times, like when i used to sell nickels and dimes/
Still see the faces you used to pull, the sounds you make, shame to witness your spirit break/
We used to just play and fight, didnt expect the phone call i was gettin that night/
Used to hit you up with spanish lines, god i wish i could relive it all one more time/

Sorry girl, i wish i could take it all back/
Provoked and i had to react, i didnt mean it like that/
I miss you, but its been going on for too long/
Remember to keep ya head up and be strong/
Just keep this forever as our song/

Its a year later and we've moved in different directions/
Starin at a stranger with a perplexed complextion/
Is it you, or just a new version? 6.0/
I dont know, lookin for the old you, where'd you go?/
Messin with a new crew, shits changed since i left/
Everyday i see you i still have to catch my breath/
So i'll spit till there aint none left, just to show you i love you to death/
I got a new girl, and you got a new man/
Maybe we'll meet again in gods great plan/
Ain't much time left for me, gonna fly outta here move back to kentucky/
I still wonder if years after you remember this/
Our first kiss, your soft lips, i just wish.../
That one day we would cross paths again/
Theres fork in the road, see you later my friend/
A girl like you i'll never be able to comprehend/
I'll still be dreaming of you well into the depends/
Just know that i'll love you till the end/

Sorry girl, i wish i could take it all back/
Provoked and i had to react, i didnt mean it like that/
I miss you, but its been going on for too long/
Remember to keep ya head up and be strong/
Just keep this forever as our song/

Was going to add more but its just a simple key... any ideas? A concept in the making...

This was nice man...
heartfelt shit..

keep postng

Starin at a stranger with a perplexed complextion/
Is it you, or just a new version? 6.0/nice

the first verse was more complex but the second one was deeper

nice one.............SLADIN u could've tried harder to reply..........blah blah inspire the usual vocab flow mulites shit good..........


STOP SLEEPING PEOPLE

^^definetly feelin it inspire,nicely written good vocab,and a good story...liked the hook...the fork in the road line was nice,youll never comphrehend,very nicely written inspire...i liked th esecond verse more,,the first..seemed a bit out,dunno why,amybe the rhyme scheme was different or soethign small i couldnt pick uptrills right..second verse deeper,first complex...mix em both so you have complex deepness...ill..

nicely written i liked it...

bismillah

^^^work in progress... much love for the replies...

Ill piece.........I was loving it.........U came back wit a strong piece........Katie died.........How did she die............?

that was ill, a lil low on tha multis but u dont always need multis to make a god piece,it was def. deep,i wass feelin it,keep spittin,peace kidd

this was very nice, I was feeling it, kinda reminds me of a relationship I had. anyway, this had some great lines, more original than most people's love pieces, and it had hook. I miss hooks, they used to be in every piece, and now maybe 1 in 5 pieces have them. AND the hook fit the piece perfectly.
this kind of reminded me of one of those punk songs about love...take that as a complement, I love punk.
check out my stigmata piece
Peace

Bash you are the stupidest person on RB... serious... SHE DID NOT DIE WHERE THE HELL DID YOU PULL THAT FROM... and im not a femcee dammit...

lol@bash... uppin

You're a emcee i didnt kno dat........Ur name sound like a femcee name and ur avator is a female......My bad dawg...........

hahaha^^Mad funniness mix-up..LMAO..haha Nice piece but Inspire...Came dope on this one...Upppin this one....

.....................Pz......................

this was hott, and the thread is funny, lol @ you and bash. nahh seriously this was off the hook can u peep my piece called Cream 2003

inspire is a girl....
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typing like him (he's my idol)
dopeneess on this one....
lets collab...im starting audio
soon homie...lets do it....

^^fuck you... lol, i gotta post a pic or something to prove i'm not... did you happen to hear this from kapone? don't listen to him... i mean his homepage is http://www.swallowitall.com