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Mad Man 05-29-03 11:58 AM

13th Disciple (2-0) vs. Meta 5 (2-0)
 
Check in's by Sunday
Verses by Tuesday
Voting Ends Thursday or when polls close

No biting, feeding or recycling.

No D/R or Hata

10-30 lines

DaviD WoRdplay 05-29-03 04:33 PM

Oh..... This Should Be a Fun battle here......

..................What Line Limit do you want to agree on?

13th Disciple 05-29-03 06:45 PM

whatcha say bout 15?.....<---lines not barz....some niggaz get that confused.......................................... ................................

DaviD WoRdplay 05-29-03 09:29 PM

aight...... yeah, I always go in lines......... not bars....

15 is straight.....................


lets do this

13th Disciple 05-30-03 06:35 PM

seein we both 2-0......only one can elevate......that one will be me..........its time to put the women and children to bed.......and go lookin for some muthaphuckin dinner........................



yo...yo....yo....come on....come on......yo..yo..........


I'ma Discipline Meta Like An Abusive Father 15 Lines To Title Him
Sonned/Exorcise This Demon Wit Spiratical Words Screamin Holy
Shit Already Left Him Speakin In Tongues

Ur Intelligence Must Be Artificial Cuz U Thinkin U Beatin Me Isn't
Even CLose To Being Real/My Lyrical Virus Bein Afflicted Upon Ur
Database A Cyber Jesus Christ Couldn't Even Heal

I'm Worser Than Seven Plagues Of Egypt Commin Correctin
Changin Ur Heart/Meta Couldn't Flow If The Red Sea Crashed
Upon Him When Moses Split It Apart

I'll Take Clippers To His Dome Provin Text Isn't The Only Way That
I'll Fade Him/I Must Be Readin Dyslexic Cuz Even His Name Points
Out The Fact That In This Battle I Ate-M

Drop Ur Verse In Closed Battles Cuz Disciple Already Sealin Ur
Fate/How The Fuck U Gonna Win IN This Arena When Ur Punches
Are Thrown A Second Too Late

I'll Amputate A Buttcheek Provin I'll Still Be Victorious While Spittin
Half Assed/Ur Elementary Rhymes Can't Compete Wit Ivy League
Lines Meta Ur Severely Out Classed

Be A Witness As I Immobilize His Vocalbox Droppin His Verse
Hearin Nuthin But Mute/Disciples Lyrics Shine Radiant Wit Beauty
While If I Was Drunk Metas Still Wouldn't Be Cute

I Private Messaged Meta Asked Him Whats His Response If A
Faggot Asked Him To Kiss/This Homo Said 'Between U And Me I
Been Kind Of Alone In This Situation I'll Say ....
Quote:
Originally posted by Meta 5

lets do this


....i went one line over....theres 16.....good luck.......i hope u don't feed or bite..........1

DaviD WoRdplay 06-01-03 11:30 PM

Damn... This it goin' to be good...
 
Things to know:
- Ruthless killed 13 in the eilte front lines 5-1..Click the link

anyways, fuck those lil sparks, here's the "REAL FIRE"....
Rehearse wit ya HAND, Cause you couldn't HOLD a Crowd if ya Penciled them In
Even the most loyal of ya fans, agree, "When It comes to ILL, Ur only second to Him"

Aight Let's Go…
I bring fire, while ya mild cajun at most kid.. amazin with posts?.
haha Shit, What a Joke, you only good for an occasional vote..
You're only here cuz It's Ur Time to Die, you aint Ill so stop frontin…
Disciple make an audio? Fuck…thank God for the STOP button…
It's the end of your web movements, your e-motions I abuse'm...
I've come to the conclusion that you being ill..is a simple illusion...
Fuck disciple, Only took up rap after rejection from American Idol
Another wannabe Jesus not knowing I'm the Main Man in the Bible
Let's Fight so I can slap you with the Mic and leave you Toothless
Much Overrated, matter of fact, Weren't You murdered by Ruthless?

Let's Switch…
I'm hella-amazing ,, stellar-with-phrases ,,, removing felons-from-cages...
i upped the devils pay check cuz its hell I'm raising...you can't sick a loss on me! I'm well L-evading!!!! (elevating)

Mad Man 06-01-03 11:59 PM

Let me start off by saying great battle to both of you, and you made this a hard decision for me here's the breakdown

13's Killer Lines:
I'll Amputate A Buttcheek Provin I'll Still Be Victorious While Spittin
Half Assed/Ur Elementary Rhymes Can't Compete Wit Ivy League
Lines Meta Ur Severely Out Classed

Be A Witness As I Immobilize His Vocalbox Droppin His Verse
Hearin Nuthin But Mute/Disciples Lyrics Shine Radiant Wit Beauty
While If I Was Drunk Metas Still Wouldn't Be Cute

Overall: pretty good, I don't know some parts I was feeling though

Meta's Killa lines:

Let's Fight so I can slap you with the Mic and leave you Toothless
Much Overrated, matter of fact, Weren't You murdered by Ruthless?

You're only here cuz It's Ur Time to Die, you aint Ill so stop frontin…
Disciple make an audio? Fuck…thank God for the STOP button…

Overall: All right, I liked it, I liked it a lot.

Vote: Meta 5, he brought a new fresh approach that I liked, that's just the facts, could have used some more lines, and made it easier for me.

13th Disciple 06-02-03 12:32 AM

heard the ruthless thing from phrantik..........but yeah.........good comeback...................uppin this thing........................................1

Evolve 06-02-03 09:57 AM

A man... this was a dope battle

13 came with some nice punches... i liked the way he set up each one... the only thing i wasnt feeling was the seperation of each bar.... but all in all you had a nice verse

Meta came hard too.... his verse was full of witty wordplay and humorous punches... the stop button and ruthless lines were tight

damn this is a tight battle... hmmmm... ima go with Meta... but by just by a midgets pubic hair

Vote Meta

Chrit 06-02-03 02:17 PM

Quote:
Originally posted by Mad Man
Let me start off by saying great battle to both of you, and you made this a hard decision for me here's the breakdown

13's Killer Lines:
I'll Amputate A Buttcheek Provin I'll Still Be Victorious While Spittin
Half Assed/Ur Elementary Rhymes Can't Compete Wit Ivy League
Lines Meta Ur Severely Out Classed

Be A Witness As I Immobilize His Vocalbox Droppin His Verse
Hearin Nuthin But Mute/Disciples Lyrics Shine Radiant Wit Beauty
While If I Was Drunk Metas Still Wouldn't Be Cute

Overall: pretty good, I don't know some parts I was feeling though

Meta's Killa lines:

Let's Fight so I can slap you with the Mic and leave you Toothless
Much Overrated, matter of fact, Weren't You murdered by Ruthless?

You're only here cuz It's Ur Time to Die, you aint Ill so stop frontin…
Disciple make an audio? Fuck…thank God for the STOP button…

Overall: All right, I liked it, I liked it a lot.

Vote: Meta 5, he brought a new fresh approach that I liked, that's just the facts, could have used some more lines, and made it easier for me.



Couldnt have said it better myself

vote meta in a tight one

TrIfLiN 06-02-03 02:22 PM

Well okay then.. Pretty fun shit to read..^ But i have to aggree with what they said..


Vote Meta..

~RuThLEss~ 06-02-03 02:31 PM

OMG...............LOL 13 u my boy...and MEta...u comedy 4realz....lol

AIght like everybody already explained...........I think 13 u came RAw on this one........So i have to go with Meta cuz he made me laugh...yo...lol with PErsonals and shit......


Vote MEta...........

13...once again.....man u should have went last dawg....lol

13th Disciple 06-02-03 06:07 PM

looks like this will be my first lost in r.b.b.l......good battle kid and keep up the good work.............................................. ..................1

DaviD WoRdplay 06-02-03 06:29 PM

Thanks 13.......

Very Good Battle......... you gave me the toughest challenge yet besides Mystery Murdera....

Good luck in the future kid

Jackmioff 06-02-03 07:34 PM

Not A Very Good Battle, Expected Betta.. I Don't Think meta
Tried... Close Shit Here tho...

I'll Take Clippers To His Dome Provin Text Isn't The Only Way That
I'll Fade Him/I Must Be Readin Dyslexic Cuz Even His Name Points
Out The Fact That In This Battle I Ate-M

^iight, not bad.

Meta won wid a Betta Verse, I like The Ruthless line... 13 you need to change your style..lol

bring fire, while ya mild cajun at most kid.. amazin with posts?.
haha Shit, What a Joke, you only good for an occasional vote..
You're only here cuz It's Ur Time to Die, you aint Ill so stop frontin…
Disciple make an audio? Fuck…thank God for the STOP button…

^^This was pretty good...

Close Battle,

Vote=Meta


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