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JHustler 05-29-03 04:52 PM

My First Spit Here
 
yo, yo ,yo,

Dis is my first spit but im hotter than ever/
I lick bitches clit and i nut on dey sweater//
When i spit my flows come out clever/
I can kill any nigga in ever season and in any weather//
U my think my shit stupid but i don't really care/
As long as when i spit niggaz know that im here//
When i battle i'll make niggaz shake in fear/
Niggaz read my shit and wanna take my gear//
Nigga please im ruthless leavin niggaz toothless/
Im da nigga tellin kids what da truth is//
Dat im da hottest mc and niggaz dat battle me is foolish/
And i'm da tightest nigga and i'll always be da coolest//

your_end 05-29-03 05:06 PM

s'aight, personally im not into tha basic 'gangsta' rhymes but s'all good... this was... yea... whatever it was...

peace


keep buildin'...

Smokin Dro 05-29-03 05:52 PM

dats was ight

Genetikz 05-29-03 10:53 PM

yea was iight for a 1stimer, u need to elivate alot n consentrait when ur writin alot of silly errors in speelin n grammer spoiled yo flow

Bash 05-29-03 10:54 PM

Nice drop for a first timer . i was feelin it........Keep spittin and stay active


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