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metaphysical one vs L-Sane
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no dick ridin/crew votes bars-unlimited now drop ya verse |
hey yo what up ill vote when yall drop
represent kid!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
YO i WILL HiT THIS IF SOME GOES TO MY BATTLE AND MAKE A HONEST VOTE THEN i WILL HIT THIS AND MAKE MY VOTE!!!AND THATS AH DEAL!!!!!
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=50920 |
just saw this (next time accept in front lines before settin' shit up). keyin' up some shit. i'll drop in a 1/2. 1
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simply put . . .
Those shells in your avatar are the only shots you got in this// Hot as piss I’ll singe your pre-conceived rhymes, that’s gonna be the plot of this// You should’ve just laid low, cause this kid from BK is about to get KO’ed// Agreed to this cause I kidnapped your guardian angel, shit I still have his halo// Lyrically I act with such swiftness that I’ll make you witness your own death// Gotta crawl before you walk’,and you tripped takin’ baby let alone grown steps// Let’s be clear - you’re swearin’ you’re ill?, that’s absurd purgery// Lyrically murder me?, shit you gon’ be the one in verbal surgery// Try to oppose and I just run rampant wit’ the skillz I got - I’m a fuckin’ genius// I just composed another diss anthem like Francis Scott and I just keyed this// Best believe this, your weak punches just won’t land like blind pilots// 7 years your lyrical senior, you just shouldn’t have opposed my mind’s mileage// I’m so sick that when I spit they call the textual territory the BACT-AREA// (bacteria) There’s no antidote so close you’re throat cause your attack’ll be wack and inferior// cause if you can go to hell for killin’ contenders, well then I guess I’m guilty as sin// You ain’t ill, I’m the only one in the infirmy and you’re just at the window lookin’ in// Take you’re two biggest weaknesses and I’ll go back and forth like a pendulum// I’ll leave your brain stem tremblin’ just cause you attempted to meddle in// My reign, cause Chrit is avoidin’ me so I guess I’m the new “King”// Cause My lyrics - shit ain’t no finer thing, U get rocked like diamond rings// I elevate so much I look below and see the tops of jet liner wings// And your rhymes are designed weak - sorry, I can’t say no kinder thing// I’m explodin’ on you quicker than lightin’ a match in a room filled wit’ nothin’ but natural gas// That’s the only way you’ll spontaneously COME BUST, forced to FIRE your ghostwriter at last// Cause you bite like shark attacks so I’ll call you the Great White cause you have no HOPE// Lyrics suicidal like those in old folks homes, but until now he was usin’ an old rope// 7-0? cause previous opponent was weak, so when Lyric went to jump the rope broke// But each line of mine ensures the noose is nice and tight, just like every ryhme in my dope flow// So you ain’t makin’ it out of this battle alive like Biggie in Chevy Suburbans in Los Angeles// Cause with each line of mine you’ve sustained heavy damages, so don’t even spit back son, I just handled this// . . . saw the unlimited lines shit so I spit 30 just to be safe (don't want anyone swayed cause you post 30 and I post 15) . . . alright, spit . . . |
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check it......
"metaphysical"… you’ll die ‘sucking’ like a freak with a fetish for sociopath penises// ‘Urine’ a whole toilet bowl of trouble… its no wonder that you reek of piss// The evilest egotist… speaking grievances on sequences// When L-Sane rocks the mic it seems as if… lifelong atheists start screaming “JESUS LIVES!”// Believe me bitch… even in paralysis, from head to toe you’re feeling this// Coming to bring life to peoples kids like semen jizz// Conceited as… any other monster hybrid with no weaknesses// Call me out? stop dreaming for a piece of this… optic vibrance scar your iris// Ultravirus… streaming quick through modem ports to start up riots// On the mic… BST does more ‘yo-yo’ than Oprah diets// I heard your call to violence and I answered… got your skull in vices// L-Sane’s the type to crush your mind ‘til the bone fragments clog your sinus// You won’t ‘survive’ this… call it bias but you’re getting voted off our 4 man island// You’ve lost your ‘Deadly’ touch… like contra fighters with arthritis// Coming at me with that weak shit… looking like you lost your slaughter license// Pussy… I harm vaginas and I know this whore’s coordinates// A solo vocalist with more potent opiates than your dope associates// ‘Your Superior’…? ok… get on the floor your holiness// Go ahead… try and get these boots out your colon orifice// STILL posting glorious… with more warheads than the former soviets// You won once… should’ve savored it staying on the shore harmonious// L-Sane's… sorta like the wealthiest of Microsoft executives// "metaphysical" in deep shit… upside down… i think it’s time to swallow excrement// I let you flow awhile so you might’ve seemed cool… to degenerates and special problem residents// The poster child for tiny gene pools… and as expected… you deny your mom’s incestuous// Ask "m.o.c", his “Sister’s Not The Only Slut” cuz even he sees you “Dangling” off my nuts trying to get competitive// And like a kid with speech impediments… you k-kinda t-talk repetitive// Damn "metaphysical"… you’re even wack for a EMCEE that wishes he was melanous// Watch L-Sane the specialist eat his comp… I relish this// Supreme damages battlers… challengers and manager’s with recklessness// I’m horror’s gory genesis… yet you stand there with that bloody gash across your wrist// L-Sane slaps hostages while this cat talks politics and asks for armistice// 64 000 bells alarming kids… that’s one for every dick you’ve gone and kissed// With a 10-inch average… that’s over one mile of flesh that’s touched your lips// … Exploding blood vessels in your capillaries… inject a vicious threat// I just had ‘sex’… plus you ‘blow balls’ so ain’t no way I’m getting ‘upset’// This vet… got you so immersed in my world your shadow begins to sweat// Hands twisting necks of "metaphysical" the nob gobbler through cable lines on internets// Asshole… not gay, but I’m in yours next… biting little wussy breaking molars on my gob-stoppers// Then kick the rest off the floor with this final ‘jaw dropper’ |
uppin 4 votes^^
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aight this was real close..........
Lyrically insane took it in a close one however... meta's wordplay and flow was on but I just didnt see many good punches vote Lyrically And damnit son get my name out your sig... You aint beat me!!! return the favor and pep me vs t-pound in rbbl |
Damn when ya'll said unlimited bars ya'll wasn't playin!
Anyhow this was really close almost to close to call really but I see it like this As far as vocab and flow, ya'll cancell each toerh out becasue it was eaual on both levels, puches when back and forth too.. Lyrically I act with such swiftness that I’ll make you witness your own death// Gotta crawl before you walk’,and you tripped takin’ baby let alone grown steps// ^^ Witty punch by Meta Ultravirus… streaming quick through modem ports to start up riots// On the mic… BST does more ‘yo-yo’ than Oprah diets// ^^ Then L-Sane came back with that one ant it had me chuckling THe difference was L-Sane with puches that hit alittle harder, but on;y by the skim of his teeth Vote= Lyrically Insane Ya'll click on the link and vote on the battle with D-Dizzle vs. Carsonjet http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=52010 |
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yo no doubt this battle was Ill as *^%.....
but theres has to be a winner....... i read both verses and i was feelin metaphysicals much more..... i thought l-sane was on point but his flow was what threw me off.......wasnt feelin it... just my two cents............. vote=metaphysical |
This battle was fuckin ill like a bitch
but has to come down to a winner Ima have to edge it to l-sane he came with a better flow and But One u had nice punches and shit, check my shit out http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...?threadid=52048 |
sorry, but SQ's vote (^^^^^^) doesn't count. it's a crew vote. check it (http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=48220) - they're both listed on the NSBL roster. mods, fix the polls please. 1
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holy shit...........i felt like i just read the novel Moby Dick......okay...hold on......i'm dizzy............................okay........meta i like ur style...u came out nice.............good punches and wordplay....but lyrical came out a little bit better.........i felt his more......maybe if u wrote a fuckin story like him than u could've of won....but sorry.......i'm goin wit lyrical..........1
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