The_Repressed
 

srry i let yall down with this one couldnt meet my unreal expectations

like i have time to read all this, but what i read sounds really nice dog keep wrighting!

hey tanx man ppl judge my shit then drop a link and ill judge u

uppin for some responses come on peeps ill return the fav i promise

this was pretty good...it seemed kinda tedious. there were a lot of rhyming words, so that it almost seemed like a dr seuss kinda thing....it had a generally good message, but for some reason I wasn't really feelin in. didn't reach out and grab me or anything, but it was still good.
Peace

lol dude he called your rhymes dr.seuss style lol

it was kinda o well it was meant to be rhyming

holla @ you nicas!

it was nice. kind of long. but what the hell isn't. maybe a pimps love life. *shrug* yeah, anyway, the chorus was nice, if sang slowly. i guess this is a slow dark song? or fast and angry? i'm not sure, couldn't tell, still alright though.

peace






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thanx come on more reviews