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redragon 05-29-03 08:28 PM

My diss to someone on another site
 
*picks up mic*
You resemble a disgrace to All-Ladies, Your only "Superman" When I "Called-Shady " //
Just outta the Cradle of Balled-Babies, I just Spit on this "Turkey" and say it's "All-Gravey" //

Imma rip ya raw-crew and take all-you with more "explanations 4 actions" then a kid at law-school //
Hey bro, you Couldn't "Cut" dope freestyles with a saw-tool, Your more or less an NBS -ja-rule //

Kid cant get a roster-out, Whats this talkin-about ? A millions bars runnin-of-da-mouth //
I'm Jockin-ya-out, While I stuff your head in the garbage-can like "osca-The-Grouch" //

Me-N-you Cause a Great Rumble but I continue to stay-humble, when these grenades-tumble //
Your like a gay-uncle, and your one "Fire" You and Sadam would make a great-couple //

Watch when I kick these rhymes outta ya head and past-the-stars //
When I'm known for exceeding lines , your known for having a lack-of-bars //

It's time to disect-this kids head-trip with a spetic text-script //
Just the next-b!tch, that I mess-with and gets left-split with red-bled-wrists //

Reguardless-of-beef , I'm a shark-in-da-sea, your just another target-to-me //
Your not a artist-to-me,your just plain retarded-to-me,Who cant come-hard-when-he-breathes //

I'll be so cold that ice gleams~ when I spit these cats'll get flashed like hi-beams//
Asking Why-me, Slit preciecly, swallow a poem, and say you have internal Rhyme-schemes //

Your already creatin-you-sets so come at me but I'm wastin-your-breathe //
Givin you a real taste of-a-vet, when I smash your head to your monitor so your-adjacent-to-text //

Take a name, to be the best to get-it be there the first to step-in-it //
this was just mess written, An Easy murk in ten-Minutes //

~dragon~ up feedback don't sleep

Bash 05-29-03 09:03 PM

Sorry dawg............You're ill but u cant be posting diss open mics to other emcees.........................I think this will be closed

west 05-29-03 09:35 PM

Yo good battle vers dawg i liked tha multies,wordplay.

PEACE

redragon 05-29-03 09:49 PM

west,does warlords need another member if so holla at me 1ne

andgolo 05-31-03 04:28 PM

great lyrics man!
 
Great lyrics, great flow, great freestyle

2hOt4tV 05-31-03 05:16 PM

its iight

redragon 05-31-03 10:55 PM

upping

tRiLL 06-01-03 05:36 AM

na bash,,,,,,,,like the usual disses are alrite,,,,,,,,,,,

but u know what i'm talkin about.......when there was crew disses
everyday..........like each memba just kept postin disses after disses
that was annoying dogg.............

dragon this looks more like a battle.........and whats the point of copying and pastin this here

its not like anyone knows the otha guy.......

B Newz 06-01-03 05:52 AM

ok first off ima say this. that was nice but, whats with postin it here? u 2 scared to show it to the other kat? wsup with that shit. but anyway nice drop kid. pzz~

Dont be a herb, Return the fav.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=52579

redragon 06-01-03 11:54 AM

i showed this to the other person and we're going back and forth right now

PS:up


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