my life
 

yo i cant stand livin my life anymore, and im hopin to end it soon wit a 4four//
cant help pushin people away its just that im afraid of people who care about me//
when i get into an emotional state i wish i could express myself differently//
but i cant stop hatin my self and i wish i would be left out to dry, thinkin about commitin suicide or findin another way to die//
my life is in a mess and im literally in distress, so let me confess my problems in what i do best//
writin is tha best way for me to release my anger, but for those who try to help me might be in complete danger//
im completely distrot hopin my soul begins to rot, cant find a spot for me in this world so im hatin myself alot//
my life is never on track anymore and i cant focus on my troubles cuz im helpin others wit theres//
forgot my purpose here on earth and wen i try to recall my past my heart and body begins to tear//
and when i surpress my feelings i fill up wit rage and its best for me to be locked up in a cage, and fall off tha platform so im notin but a forgotful page//
i try to talk to people about my problems but i become mute and its ruinin my self-esteem, causin others to care even more and it fills me up wit a rageful steam//
im startin to keep to myself again and im not gonna talk to anyone about anything anymore//
my problems seem to keep growin and sho no signs of slowin down, im bein foolish but fuck it my world is sore//
my lyrics tell stories about my life and they wont lie about anything//
if anyone tempers me into a pissed off mood all hell is breakin loose and if its u then ima be tha first to swing//
my fuse is lit and im about to explode sendin all that i kno into oblivion and nothin will remain//
my mind has lost all forms of intelligence,im not gonna give up my repentence for destroyin others hearts cuz if i do my hands r coverd in blood and will be permenantly stained//

replied to anti and bash

i like i like, and dats good cause i dont really like those emotional ones, but dis was good, u got it especally wit da wordplay, and the flow was kinda choppy, but u got ya point across no doubt

good shit fam

DAMNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNN nice shit fam emotional indeeed


i think this wus perfection at most..............

nice shit, felt the emotions, good word play and floe, keep elevating
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was ill, i liked it, flow was bad but wordplay was ill

uppin for more thoughts on tis

That was exatally how i feel inside sometimes but it will eventually leave for a while but it does come back.....this was sweet.

uppin tis again