Penetrate^
 

im quick draw mcgraw when it comes to rhymin//
blast kats fast with the 6 shoota,then keep on ridin//
lock aim at wack kats where ima stay firin//
never caterin to your favorites it gotta be rough//
never easy to beat me when im completely submerged//
within my verses,exerptin verses to hurt kids//
i leave you hurt-in ass off in the dirt bitch//
im dangerous when on the mic brains get bust//
B Newz be my name to thugs,cuz when i come thru its bad news//
i smash crews,bust raps like glocks,they pass through//
vest or no vest,i destroy kids,when i lay my spits//
i spray my spits,better yet i straight up penetrate you kids//
what?

this mos def will be finished finalized and recorded. guaranteed. -

not bad, fierce rhymer, bar structure needs a lil work though

naw structure is str8 trust me. im versitile when spittin itll work. but good looks kid. up^

this was ok, kind of basic though.

you said your recording it into a song? wheres the rest?

check out my newest open mic " the storm"

man u must not of read this. if u didnt see i said i was gonna finish it.

up^

This shit was aight

up motha suckaz!

Nice Man,Real Nice.. Seems Ive Found Sum1 Dat Can Write a Gangsta Track Almost as Good Az Me...

pZ... $pitzophrenic

this wasnt gangsta but ok? lol.

this was type ill, it still needs work, but hell, it was still hott

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the tone in this was agressive and in this case it worked sorta like M.O.P stylee ya nah i mean? it flowed well and ya rhyme structure was aight but i think you need to throw in a few multies. finish it off properly and then check it more in depth aight peace

no doubt. no fuckin doubt. uppin.

it was alrite.....next time keep off the gangsta shit

Whack..

Didn't Like it...

how do you get off dissing sand's drop...with a whack ass shitty rhyme like this?..lmao..geta clue kid,..