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BlUnT-MC 05-30-03 01:20 PM

Open Mic ----> I'm not responsible..
 
yo, my influential fluent sequential rhyme style.//
rocks to any instrumental, so get-yo mental heind-sight timed right.//
you ain't never been to my heights, my lines like a noose, tied tight around this industrial wind pipe.//
it ain't my responsibility to keep you fly'n right, so if you try'n buy everything I'm sayin', I'm say'n I ain't accountable.//
you like black sheep, following with pounds-a-wool, equal ta pounds-a-doe, count-em-yo.//
for every unit I move it's like a thousand more.//
stacks to the ceiling.. from the floor, wallet's too fat for conceiling.//
but yo, there's a good reason, my tracks like spiritual healing.//
listners get a warm feeling, not love or another emotion, spontanious combustion, take this as your final warning.//

deeni 05-30-03 01:25 PM

oooooohhhhhhhhh damn kid ease up a lil bit you hittin'em to hard, ill flow keep it comin.

BlUnT-MC 05-30-03 01:53 PM

lol.. yea.. I had to do somethin' quick.. I'm at work and actually have work to do today.. otherwise it would've been longer and done more than just hit.. lol

WORD~PERFECT 05-30-03 01:54 PM

NICE TO SHORT BUT TO THE POINT UPPIN

casamist 05-30-03 02:23 PM

i think that it's really good with multi's......i think it's too short though....at times the wording would mess up the flow i was getting from it....some lines didn't make too much sense like...

"it ain't my responsibility to keep you fly'n right, so if you try'n buy everything I'm sayin', I'm say'n I ain't accountable.//"

when u say i'm sayin i'm sayin and if u say you aren't responsible then why do u need to say you aren't accountable?

i think it wasn't as solid as it could be if you took more time to write it..but it was def above average....like a 6/10

ThE_uNrEaL_1 05-30-03 02:29 PM

nice multi way to represnt ur crew good flo, too short for somethin' like tht

BlUnT-MC 05-30-03 02:36 PM

I know.. fuck eh...

and casamist: I said I wasn't responsible to keep people from taking my words too seriously, and If they believe what they hear and act on them.. I'm not accountable.. that's what that line meant...


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