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D-Dizzle vs. Carsonjet
[QUOTE]Originally posted by carsonjet
[B]bring it 10-20 lines drop within da hour no dik or krew votes no feeding...drop at time of finishing ur verse Aiight those the rules you set, I'm already checked in so waiting on you to check. |
chekin in.....jus figured out u put it in here insteada front-lines...
*i should be ready in bout 10 minutes* //////////////////////////////// |
aiight then I'm keyin my shit now just to show I ain't feeding........................................... ......
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....i know ur not a feeder....
yo chek it//... yo i spit harder an run faster than dis home-boy mista dizzle// Claimin ya ryhmes "Rain" like terror...but all im seeing is a drizzle// Lyricly i pour showers of acidic fluid ontoppa you// Like MI:2, my lyrics destroy u...meet bak at rally poit for rendevouse// Stepped inta ring wit CJ, but u werent lookin for a battle// record to my left had u thinkin u frontin a newby witta rattle// Underestimate,...man's worste weakness... vulneribilty commensed// Problem be...not much margin for error on ur side ta phyisicly dispense// shit talkers, newby stalkers, i send em all home wit minimal pay// Cj....Lyrikal Fractionologits....sliced ya up move ya vic's...2 decimals away// hold up.....what da fuk dat stench?// dawg...before u spit, b sure ta light sum "cents"// betta yet make sum....how bout u make it "50"// "in-da-club"..wit new threads..only way u threadin swiftly// Carsonjet// double take an look before u step// ne-one wit vic's on me got more dan 23// jus like da number on da Jersey ya pretended to be//.... Im sum one u look up to...g// next//..... |
ya,ya,yo..peep..zeroed in..let me talk to you for a minute.....
Yo Carson, I’mma 'fuck it up' like 'yous a mistake', how you gonna battle the main flow of cursed words!? When your 'record is below .500' like 'underground Daytona workers'/ One day it’s Miami, then Boston, I thought you was from 'Philly'-when-bumpin-ya-gums Your hermaphrodite uncles made you the example of incest in the 'City-of-Brotherly-Love'/ You got no chance like cheating death, I’ll need a tree bark to dush C Cuz his wins against me ‘gon look like Lil Kim’s pussy/ …0… I peeped your bitch style, Open Mic reject using big words you can’t-spell Dictionary.com can’t help you with words you made up to rhyme cuz you ain’t-skilled/ Carson your hoe ass to soft to punch, strike your cream puff frame right through-to-you Bitch I’ll smack you so silly you wouldn’t get serious for your mother’s funeral/ Ohh…and by the way… I heard ya ass like to say nigga, that’s ain’t cool so I gotta attack-the-dude Knowin you so white in snowstorms even your shadow lose track-of-you/ Hey White Chocolate, you gotta be from the burbs cuz niggas wouldn’t enjoy-your-coy-deeds Saying shit like that you 'can’t make it in the hood' like 'retarded Toyota-employees'/ Now don’t get me wrong I’m no bigot, I’m cool with all face-of-races But peepin’ this white boys wack rhymes, his shit ‘gon MAKE-me-racist/ But that’s alright; wanna be colored?, you get punched-up-in-the-face Your eye gon have more black hanging around it than Justin-Timberlake/ So, ..um let me count..let see….I got one more line It’s 3 things sure in life.. birth, death and a win if I battle you one more time/ Quote:
I just that damn good, kiddo It's nothin'.... |
u'd be a great historian...bringin up shit from like the ice-ages of when i started here...but like everything else i've elevated and im way above all that shit...so u basicly pumped ur verse off a bunch of sensless matter......nice try tho....
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Pa..pa..pump it up!^^^^^.......................................... .............Uppin for votes .................................................. ...........
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dizzle took this on punches and personals....
not bad from carson but dizzle took this pretty easily... return the favor and peep my rbbl battle vs t-pound .......... |
Aiight then uppin some mo.......................................poll vote people............................................ .....
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D-dizzle got this shit from punches
and it flowed nice to check my shit http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...?threadid=52048 |
Uppin for votes......................................drop links and I'll peep out and vote on other battles........................................... ..................................,..............
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Yeah.......Pretty Much Dizzle Took This Hands Down..........Better Punches Wordplay And All.......Good Battle Though CarsonJet.............................Vote=Dizzle. .....1
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all in all good battle but Drizzle took this one he had punches,personals,wordplay....he just brought it better..
carsonjet..good flow a couple of punches but too many fillers... vote=D-Dizzle |
its all been said above.......
dizzle came harder and had the better verse.....carson....too much filler not enough killer dizzle gets ma vote |
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